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ILLPrOpHeCy

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DEEP READ!!!!
« on: February 19, 2003, 02:12:11 PM »
i aint no good at that style with multis and all rest of it im going back to my writing
im gonna write a song 4 yall


Lord forgive me please hear these cries
Please prepare me for the loneliness this board provides
I need you dearly to you I speak through the heart of a child
Sincerly hope Im listenin Im hurtin inside
You got so many of us flirtin with pride Im workin with time
Tryin to a better life provide a life which rightfully mine
But circumstances and these petty fights is snipin the mind
How can I man so insightful be subjected to the questions?
All the wise I acknowledge God if wisdom applied
Most understand what I visualize while love is criticized
My life they make it so spitful that they pity mine
You know Ill circle the globe for a girl of mine

CORUS
Is god real or is he a myth
If heaven woz a mile away wud it make a diff?
Have mercy Have Mercy HAVE MERCY
Have mercy on me coz im trying to survive
Have mercy on others who fighting to stay alive


Theres more lessons to learn persuaded gave birth to more concepts
The main thing we had each other together the family
Moms Pops two brothers complete its all I need
But suddenly you had another vision for me to see
And understandin what so many youngsters to believe
For all the anger I gave to my Queen Im now safe for the beast
And even though I have a tendency to slip when I speak
I pray for my love and strength to keep my cipher complete
Because now Im the foundation pacin
Thinkin ironically Im in the same situation

*Corus*

You see God all Im sayin is this
That if at any time you need me Ill be there in a split
Just place ya hand on my shoulder man and give me a lift
And take my last breath away with ya heavenly mist
So if you have to Idve blast out my enemys fist
But its alright Im prepared for that day
Theres just one last request HAVE MERCY
MERCY MERCY (FADES)


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Re:DEEP READ!!!!
« Reply #1 on: February 19, 2003, 02:36:19 PM »
nice piece homie. i liked it a lot
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Re:DEEP READ!!!!
« Reply #2 on: February 19, 2003, 02:47:29 PM »
Simplistic structure.. But its a real nice piece man
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Re:DEEP READ!!!!
« Reply #3 on: February 19, 2003, 03:56:57 PM »
Quote from: Gareefa on February 19, 2003, 02:47:29 PM
Simplistic structure.. But its a real nice piece man
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Re:DEEP READ!!!!
« Reply #4 on: February 19, 2003, 04:26:55 PM »
thanx
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Re:DEEP READ!!!!
« Reply #5 on: February 19, 2003, 04:27:13 PM »
anymore feedbak?
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Re:DEEP READ!!!!
« Reply #6 on: February 19, 2003, 07:56:06 PM »
Quote from: Gareefa on February 19, 2003, 02:47:29 PM
Simplistic structure.. But its a real nice piece man

Word...keep droppin dem dope verses do0d
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Re:DEEP READ!!!!
« Reply #7 on: February 21, 2003, 03:26:12 AM »
damn if my name woz mousehowl this thread wud be swarming with comments
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Re:DEEP READ!!!!
« Reply #8 on: February 21, 2003, 06:58:16 AM »
lol patience my friend
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Re:DEEP READ!!!!
« Reply #9 on: February 21, 2003, 07:46:51 AM »
Ill, to be perfectlyhonest you dont need multis man, keep doing what ya doing, it was a nice peice keep it up homie, you should get some recording in and record ya tracks...


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Re:DEEP READ!!!!
« Reply #10 on: February 21, 2003, 09:11:30 AM »
my mate is just made an agency and dus aload of garage gigs up at place called croft spa so hes gonna hook mwe up with a few of the mc's see if i can get any recordings
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Re:DEEP READ!!!!
« Reply #11 on: February 21, 2003, 09:30:54 AM »
Kewl... get in there and hook up with some of em dawg, liking the sound of it man, dont miss the chance!

Wanna battle? check my thread in this forum!

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