~bLaDe + Emence + Nexus - Mentally ILL ~

[bLaDe]

Sup ya'll ,mind peeping this track with Emence, Nexus and myself.  It's called "Mentally ILL" and this is a preview of the new HogMentalityProduction's Compilation...


-Hi-Fi- (Hi-Fi is reccomended)
-Lo-Fi- (Sounds horrible)

-Download 1-
-Download 2-

Thanks for your time, honest constructive critism will be greatly appreciated.  Peace


This is my verse, I come second, after Emence[who comes first] and before Nexus:

[HOOK]
[bLaDe]you cant touch us, we mentaly ill
[Emence]ment to be, dementedly  blazin with skill

[bLaDe]you cant touch us, we mentaly ill
[Emence]  elementally, monumentally stand out n thrill

Rising to the top like bugsy//
like Eliot ness in a vest you haterz just cant touch me//
demonic scriptures be looking ugly//
baptize my soul to release the devils from me//
Complex metaphoric patterns like persian rugs //
emerging from//
a submersion of blood//
dispersion of a flood//
like moses against the pharoe//
stay sharp like arrows//
fly like aero dynamic sparrows//


with a Mentalty ill//
reality spills//
brutaly invade you r localaty and chill//
another fatalaty kills//

irrationality thrills//
ignorance is bliss?//
then ya'll must be living in paradise//
innocence is an abyss//
grieving in its depths while it shatters lives//

biblical human//
Causin miracles with crewmen//
lyricaly spwewn//
the hate that vacates demons outta hell//
paradoxial freedom in a cell//
reedemin as I excel//
and turning mental deserts into a well//


  -{bLaDe}

[I TO DA GEEZY]

tight verses, the beat sounds real familiar, dope shit btw....  ILL shit overall....

[Suga Foot]

Nice shit ladies.  I'm feelin Emence's verse on this a lot.  Good job all around.

[__kaLipZo__]

Tight..Shit, hella, felt both verses, i like yer shit w/out doggy for some reason, emencee's verses i feel better, no offense doggy but rapin like bone dont work to good..., but as for the song was hella dope, the beat went with voals very well and sound quality is pure-perfection, look forward to see more collabs by you 2....

[bLaDe]

Tight..Shit, hella, felt both verses, i like yer shit w/out doggy for some reason, emencee's verses i feel better, no offense doggy but rapin like bone dont work to good..., but as for the song was hella dope, the beat went with voals very well and sound quality is pure-perfection, look forward to see more collabs by you 2....

LOL thanks fo the feedback homie, but there r 3 rappers, not 2.  Emence first, then me, then Nexus.  With me and emence on the chorus.

Thanks 2 all those who replyed, peace
 
  -{bLaDe}

[Matty_C]

Word, everybody forgettin bout me on the third verse  

lmao nah i know me and ee sorta sound alike

[KVB]

Nice track...

The beat was good... rhymes were also good.
I liked Nexus' last verse best, but all three of you came out pretty tight... props.

It's a good track overall, though in all honesty, nothing that stands out as exceptional.

[__kaLipZo__]

My bad Nex...its tru, you and Ee do sound very much alike Imo...props to ya...keep em comin

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

Dope shit...aiight, I've heard better from all of ya'll, but overall this song came out pretty good...Nexus did make ya'll look like some ametures, but none the less, the song is tight as a whole...My only problem with it is that it didnt sound too professianal...The hook sounded weird, and some of the vocals were louder than others...I like Nexus's idea for the "Fill it in" better, ya'll kinda fucked up his verse at the end...I wanted to mix this shit, cuz (as ya'll know) i mix most of Nexus's shit...Plus I have professional mixing tools that I'm good with...Either way, it came out sounding tight...PeACe

[emence]

lol.......

...Nexus did make ya'll look like some ametures
              ----We Are Ameatures compared to nexus lol...hes been rappin waaaaay longer than us----


My only problem with it is that it didnt sound too professianal...
             ----Well thats cuz we do it online, and not overyone has a dope mic/soundcard like nexus----

The hook sounded weird
             ----I give the hook props, i like the idea and the flow of it...props to blade for that----

I like Nexus's idea for the "Fill it in" better, ya'll kinda fucked up his verse at the end...I wanted to mix this shit, cuz (as ya'll know) i mix most of Nexus's shit
            ----Dont be mad cuz u didnt get to add your secret back ups for a Nexus Track....and the reason nexus's verse sounds fucked up is because he didnt add on to it...this was posted before he fixed the end of his verse...and btw....."yall fucked up his verse at the end" WE isnt existant...one person mixed this and it was blade...andi think he did a pretty coo job on it....i just dont think you should hate so much cuz we chose not to let u mix it-----


thanks for the comments though....keep em comin..

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

            ----Dont be mad cuz u didnt get to add your secret back ups for a Nexus Track....and the reason nexus's verse sounds fucked up is because he didnt add on to it...this was posted before he fixed the end of his verse...and btw....."yall fucked up his verse at the end" WE isnt existant...one person mixed this and it was blade...andi think he did a pretty coo job on it....i just dont think you should hate so much cuz we chose not to let u mix it-----

Uhhh, i dont know what you're talking about...stop being so damn bitter...I just said the mixing could have been a lot better...Blade and your verse was mixed in a lot louder than Nexus's verse...What, do u expect me to lie so u can feel happy about your track? Wouldn't u rather have HONEST feedback? If I wanted to hate I woulda' said that you and Blade suck ass and Nexus's verse made ya'll look like retards tryna rap, but I didn't, so shut the fuck up and take my feedback for what it is...PeACe

[.:TimeLock:.]

the beat it tight, sound like 007

blade and nexus spit the coo on this track, Emence need to work on his dilivery some i feel

but yo i think ya'll could make this shit come to gether a lil better, i'm feeling it though.

peace

[ZILLA THA GOODFELLA]

lol....I like this track alot....And I'm feelin NIK, I felt tha chorus could've been better....

And NIK, stop tryin 2 make Nexus sound like Superman....I agree he had tha best verse in this song tho....

[Matty_C]

lmfao but i am superman  

LOL

Nex

[emence]

LOL...SCCIT

"If I wanted to hate I woulda' said that you and Blade suck ass and Nexus's verse made ya'll look like retards tryna rap"


....kinda like you did? especially on Problems, and Hero....wait......all your tracks you sound like a retard...

i only said somethin because its obvious your on nexus's dick....i didnt say the song was dope or couldnt been improved....i just think its hilarious how your on his dick.......shits funny

peace