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MasterOfCeremonies
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!.::Magnificent::.!
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March 03, 2003, 12:56:50 PM »
alright... this is a new track im workin on... its 2 verses out of 3... when its done, ill drop the finished version
its over magnificent 7 - street mix beat... haha... one of the original little kid rap groups....
verse 1
yoooooo
its the -attack of the meanest- -assassin and genius-//
why cant these clowns just loosen their -grasp on my penis-//
Im -rappin with demons- to have you -gasp when your breathin-//
MoC is the only man in the game thats -lackin a weakness-//
as the -passion increases- youll get laid in a -casket with jesus-//
the -hatchet is reachin- to -crack your cerebrum- cuz your -wack when your speakin-//
your -trashed and your beaten-, -blasted with semen-, and now your -contractin diseases-//
play my -tracks in a sequence-, you cant -tame the hurricane-//
the -flames are burnin lames- and I'll -slay your vertebrae-//
been -trained to murder brains- contain strains, stay insane, and -snatch the chains of certain gangs!!-//
verse 2
yo yo
i get the -crowd groovin- with this -foul music-//
drop 'sick shit', like oprah having a -'bowell movement'-//
-loud new shit-, master of -ceremonies-, noone is -comparin homie-//
got a dick so big, all the bitches are -scared to blow me-//
the new -era slowly- creepin up, then i -slam foes-//
cuz im like -Rambo- with this -sparkin ammo-//
im the type to 'godfather' a blunt with -'Marlon Brando'-//
verbal -commando-, -teams be stressin- with this -speech injection-//
cuz the only way theyd get 'bread' is if their girls had -'yeast infections'-//
get -beat with weapons-, cuz my skills are -properly funded-//
and Im 'celibate' in this rap game, cuz im -'not to be fucked with'-!//
i dont got the third verse yet, but i felt like i should post what i have... all comments and criticism will be mad appreciated...
MoC
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da_notorious_mack
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Re:!.::Magnificent::.!
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March 03, 2003, 01:00:05 PM »
damn i saw some a this before but readin it all together im like...WHOA.......flow was tight an ya multis flowed smooth as fuck
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M Dogg™
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Muthafuckin' Don!
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Re:!.::Magnificent::.!
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March 03, 2003, 01:16:54 PM »
very nice flow... pretty good punches and witty lines. Sounds like a str8 keystyle, good job.
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MasterOfCeremonies
Lil Geezy
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March 03, 2003, 01:20:40 PM »
thanks for the feedback guys... nah this isnt really keystyle tho, its shit ive been writing here and there, im basically just throwin some of my punches ive thought of before and havent used for anything, and throwin em into a song... but thanks for the feedback, i appreciate it
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Reef
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March 03, 2003, 02:23:13 PM »
Tight man.. Real nice.. Flow was off tha hook and it was some pretty witty shit..
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TiNmaN
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Re:!.::Magnificent::.!
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March 03, 2003, 07:39:50 PM »
yo man that shit was straight HARD....props man....
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Re:!.::Magnificent::.!
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March 04, 2003, 03:39:47 AM »
nice shit MoC
u up for a quick battle?
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'Illicit'
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March 04, 2003, 05:54:13 AM »
let us know when its done yo, nice piece
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MasterOfCeremonies
Lil Geezy
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I'm a llama!
Re:!.::Magnificent::.!
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March 04, 2003, 01:07:27 PM »
thanks for all of the feedback... ill definitely post this up when its done... and to timelock... ima have to turn you down man... im just trying to stay focused on writing for my tracks you know... maybe when i finish all my shit up ill take you up on it, but at this current time, i dont really got the time for battles... but we will do it eventually
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MasterOfCeremonies
Lil Geezy
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March 05, 2003, 07:55:06 PM »
dont sleep on this
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@Ss@sSiN
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March 06, 2003, 06:42:08 AM »
wordplay was nice.. liked how it flowed.. i was reading that shit while listenin to a beat it would go on.. it was tight.. aiight.. peace..
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Still_Blazin
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March 07, 2003, 04:32:19 AM »
the flow was sooooooooooo smooth...multis were fuckin awesome love to see it in audio
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MasterOfCeremonies
Lil Geezy
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March 07, 2003, 04:35:58 PM »
thanks for the feedback yall, i really appreciate it... keep blazin.. haha... peace
MoC
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