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Inspectah

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Anxious...
« on: March 14, 2003, 04:13:34 AM »

Breathing heavily, steadily tredding my path of mental exctasy, know how im feeling?//
These emotions gots meanings, heres some empathy, trying to relax, im breaking down//
So i need the facts, coz thoughts got a head of me, its got to me, look my gaping frown//
Showing fear, nerves, tears, im disturbed, releaving myself through humorous jokes//
Count down 2 the day, when walkways, croud with a surgery bed and numerous clokes//
Hit me in reality mode, goose bumps appear, like i react to the cold, no relaxation//
Whats the outcome gone be?, NOW has come for me, ima accept my situation//
I just gotta lotta thoughts that krept a head of me, take one final breath with me//
Coz im out cold til i awake, shivering as im gassed, start to shake, brb, be patient//


...Can i have some feedback please!

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« Last Edit: March 14, 2003, 04:20:02 AM by In[spek]ta »
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Inspectah

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Re:Anxious...
« Reply #1 on: March 15, 2003, 03:45:38 AM »
can i have sum feedack plz!

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Reef

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Re:Anxious...
« Reply #2 on: March 15, 2003, 04:05:23 AM »
Nice shit
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TiNmaN

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Re:Anxious...
« Reply #3 on: March 15, 2003, 02:58:29 PM »
shit was dope and original, i liked it, props....
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TheSheriff

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Re:Anxious...
« Reply #4 on: March 15, 2003, 03:16:32 PM »
Very nice.
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Inspectah

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Re:Anxious...
« Reply #5 on: March 16, 2003, 03:35:11 AM »
Aite peepz thanx for the feedback.. its over now.. that an old key.. lol thnx now.. its all in the past now.. hehe..

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Re:Anxious...
« Reply #6 on: March 19, 2003, 11:25:39 AM »
i liked it!!  ;D
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Re:Anxious...
« Reply #7 on: March 19, 2003, 11:43:06 AM »
Nice key, flowed well and was creatively complex at the same time, keep em comin
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Re:Anxious...
« Reply #8 on: March 21, 2003, 06:19:55 AM »
flowed nice... got lost at times though
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Inspectah

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Re:Anxious...
« Reply #9 on: March 21, 2003, 02:49:17 PM »
Sup. thnx for the feedback people..

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