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da_notorious_mack

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Explosive
« on: March 18, 2003, 11:41:37 AM »
Posing-minds fake-greatness,while Mack known to drop-explosive-lines
got-em-notin-mine,it takes-great-wit then u might become a pro-in-time,
tryin ta walk-in-my-shoes,but cant get ya toes-in-mine,tryed talking-my-views
but didnt know-the-rhymes,you hoes-behind,plus i bring the most akward-news
stalking-krus,castratin-cliques,been around-too-long why ya ass-hating-bitch?
demonstrating-shit,if you think i hate ya sound-ya-wrong,call me a hata,im not takin-it
im still loud-an-strong,allowed-to-prolong,talkin bout that hall of shame,IM PROUD-TO-BE-ON

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M Dogg™

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Re:Explosive
« Reply #1 on: March 18, 2003, 12:36:01 PM »
nice piece... the end had me though... lmao.
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Re:Explosive
« Reply #2 on: March 18, 2003, 12:58:10 PM »
acually this was a nice flow i liked how it flowed...nice rhyme scheme...you just need a much better concept thaz all...good...
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MasterOfCeremonies

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Re:Explosive
« Reply #3 on: March 18, 2003, 02:12:48 PM »
sick shit mack... scheme was off the chain, multis flowed hella smoothly too... keep it up
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Re:Explosive
« Reply #4 on: March 18, 2003, 02:54:58 PM »
Real nice son...keep it up Mack
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Inspectah

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Re:Explosive
« Reply #5 on: March 18, 2003, 03:09:18 PM »
Tight piece dawg! Keep it up, i love ya lil keys, they jam packed wiv flow! lol

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Re:Explosive
« Reply #6 on: March 19, 2003, 06:17:21 AM »
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gyrl1da

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Re:Explosive
« Reply #7 on: March 19, 2003, 11:29:57 AM »
my rating 3.5 / 5 *'s... that's defintely above average 'cuz i do b givin' nig'z 1*..lol nah but that was tight tho... keep up the good work! ;)
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Re:Explosive
« Reply #8 on: March 21, 2003, 06:17:18 AM »
tight shit...
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Re:Explosive
« Reply #9 on: March 21, 2003, 06:37:46 PM »
Quote from: MasterOfCeremonies on March 18, 2003, 02:12:48 PM
sick shit mack... scheme was off the chain, multis flowed hella smoothly too... keep it up
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