I:// Stalked by Sins! - (Keystyle)

[Inspectah]

* How i feel *

It's hard being me, sometimes i just feel like giving up//
Most ryhmes express my feelings g, and how living sucks//
One minute im happy, the next im more depressed than grumpy//
Only way to get an instant repsonse, was if you called my bluff and thumped me//
Coz i bin waiting to release this built up agression//
Teach some pathetic prick, how to fight, show em a lesson//
But feelings of negativity, take over me, bodies pumpin round depression//

* Situation *

Now i bin with this girl, for like 7 days, felt like i was born again//
Suddenly we thrown abuse, and hatred, from so called sworn friends//
Taking the piss, we get laughed at, but deep down you jealous//
Blinded by the mist, you friends turn an back stab, runaway, so you cant get us//
Confusion, as we cant see what the fuck we did wrong to offend you?//
I want retribution, as its been so long, to call my own bluff, and not pretend to//
Go on the rampage, now people will see, how watching ya'girl cry n i cant do shit hurts//
Because of jealousy, two faced, metal mouthed bitch, and fatso hide in the dark and lurk//
Await the time, when alone, you confront and step up//
Fuckin square up to me bitch, insteada other people, watch ya kneck get bust//
All coz of you bitchin over lil problems you some how created yaself, thriving on lust//

* Diss *

Now i wanna get some shit off my chest, and out in the open//
Im hopin' you'll listen to these lipz, straigt up, think im chokin?//
Fuck i didnt pre-write these lyrics, they from the heart, im not jokin//
You people talk alotta shit, like you always had a grudge//
And think coz im new to ya crew, that my tempers soft like fudge//
Crookhorn, is where im living, and where im staying i wont budge//
Dont critisise me, you dont even know me, you aint got the right to judge//
Me lying to ma girl is rare, txts or no txts to hide, never to ma girl i've lied//
So lets play truth or dare, you calling me a lil kid, when ya still in ya youth "Claire"//
You goto church often, i guess it shows your dedicated and holy//
Im the wrong person to fuck with, im the 1 and only, fuck ya opinions, dont show me//
You harass daily, coz ya got no social life, and nothing better todo//
Jealous coz i gotta girlfriend, ya fuckin lesbo, people gettin together, but never you//

* Freestyle *

Fuck pre-written, ima use face to face verbal, physical contact, my fists, they hittin'//
Coz of all people, you fucked with me, D to tha O to UG, CO to tha double B//
Fucking bitch please, we just went up a level, and ditched slease//
Who you got, friends who'll prolly turn when you getta partner?//
Look what ya lost, we dont pretend, we just ignore it now, and say fuck ya//
You should see me claire, fucking man whore, with the pink hair//
Im not wise to mess, as i can get to ya mentally//
Fight dirrty, spit in ya eyes with my abuse, and you'll suffer visually//
Next time, choose ya enemies wisely, as im out looking for ya, and you'll get your come uppense, eventually//

Fuck You!

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[TheSheriff]

Very nice. Emotional, flowed well. Standard rhyme pattern, but very good.

[__kaLipZo__]

VERY nice piece, rather long but i try to give feedback for emcee's hard work, like owen said very emotion, deep shit bro, liked it.

[Inspectah]

Thnx peepz for the feedback. is there anyone else who would like to say what they think? lol

Peace ~ 1 ~