It's May 05, 2024, 08:39:30 PM
Ur good fam keep it up. Fear is for bitxhes. Raise up.
That's dope, man. Good work. I think you really need to come more prepared though. I'm tell in you, go watch more serious battles and check the flow of their deliveries and punchlines. I understand you're new to this and obviously not as good as the people in my video. But learning from great battlers would be good for anyone trying to take it seriously. That delivery and energy is so important. And once you're comfortable enough to not come off as nervous and tense.
Na, fam. I'm not saying you have to copy that style. Or their wordplay. Just the flow and the delivery. I know it's hard to say "just sound more confident up there" because you are new to it and confidence will come with experience...but if you sounded more confident it would really sound tighter...even with the same bars you used this round.Excited for the next battle. Guy on the left would give you trouble. You'd beat guy on the right.
CLIMBIN THE RANKS
Oh shit!!!!I'm give u some feedback from the audience perspective tho...don't lead so much with the 'historical scientist invader' shit so much or you're liable to come off as gimmick. Better just to kill em with metaphors and such. You're not a comic book character/time traveller. But reincarnation concepts can be cool...the KRS1 reference was GOLD tho homie!!