It's May 14, 2024, 06:55:42 PM
you dont have many friends do you...
I dont wanna discourage you, but whatever 1 does it will be insignificant.Even if you die, of course sum cry and they dont lie if they say you had a good character and they liked you. But in the end, that's insignificant too.I dont exist. I cant. cause im too deep for a society in which nobody wants to think.ppl dont like to think. they do all they can not to think. because if they do:they realize that they are nothing. because they only shine, they dont reflect.Life is just a long long cruel and painful death.. imagine bein shot and livin and dyin slowly. that's life. Life=Death.
rhythm or rhyme doesnt matter shit.I cant rhyme as tecca nina but I dont have to. Rhymes kill content what kills the expression of feelings in this casedont act like you what life's or my thoughts are about, where the fuck is the day nursery you should be in right now?? gotta make a call
Quote from: 7even on March 30, 2003, 12:11:18 PMrhythm or rhyme doesnt matter shit.I cant rhyme as tecca nina but I dont have to. Rhymes kill content what kills the expression of feelings in this casedont act like you what life's or my thoughts are about, where the fuck is the day nursery you should be in right now?? gotta make a callI just love how you respond to an observation on your poem with a personal insult.By the way, your crack addiction is becoming yet more obvious.Also, yes, rhymes can be artificial, but the Masque of Anarchy, the deepest political poem ever written, rhymed.. But I guess you're too shit to combine rhymes and content.Now, if we get back to the concept: ridiculous. For all the reasons already listed.
do you just combine my poem with the best political poem ever?thanx. cant be that bad then, huh?
hey punks, ever heard of free verse?
This is the worst poetry ever written in all of mankinds existance...