Love Poem (Again)

[Reef]

Its not supposed to flow or be some sorta rhyme.. its a poem... pretty long.... But each stanza jus represents my feelings... its real deep.. Feedback would be appriciated

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its all collapsing and folding in
im being destroyed and taken away
its all happening again


i held you so close to my chest,
knowing you would protect me
i have forgave you once and twice
instead, you try to infect me

its all collapsing and folding in
im being destroyed and taken away
its all happening again


as i sniff and the tears splash and hit the skins surface
i stare at us with our arms around one-another
do you believe that im worth the pain
belif is what you should have.. when there is a mention of my name

its all collapsing and folding in
im being destroyed and taken away
its all happening again


how long can i go on living like this?
you told me i leech off you and i cried
tears were brought to my eyes when i felt no conviction in your kiss
questions i keep asking, but you refuse when answering

its all collapsing and folding in
im being destroyed and taken away
its all happening again


im slipping, falling, i cant get up
im crying, dwelling, i cant give up
but the blade just feels so good, when you know it cuts
how long can i live like this? knowing you'll never know whats up

its all collapsing and folding in
im being destroyed and taken away
its all happening again

I've been reduced to self harm and self pitty
emptyness insdie feels like no one is with me
discipline teaches me to see past this pain
but my feelings - they will never be the same

its collapsed, it has folded in
im destroyed, im gone
its all happened again

[·SiNiStEr·]

im slipping, falling, i cant get up
isnt that a dmx line?
im crying, dwelling, i cant give up
but the blade just feels so good, when you know it cuts
dope next two lines, though. maybe the high-part in the whole thing
how long can i live like this? knowing you'll never know whats up

pretty dope key hhp, this one is on par with the others..
just stick wit ya girl man

[Inspectah]

This is a poem, which intwines exactly with how i feel, you got it all in one.. i feel the same towards my girl, and the girls i've had.. nice piece, its buetiful and unique in a sensitive way!

[Reef]

Yean sinister.. there is a DMX line in there...

[NoT]

Nice one, man. I really like this part...

how long can i go on living like this?
you told me i leech off you and i cried
tears were brought to my eyes when i felt no conviction in your kiss
questions i keep asking, but you refuse when answering

I know exactly how that feels.