vitodeluca vs. the answer (Vito won)

[vitodeluca]

Ayight, 3-0 ko 4 votes wins, lets go 15-20 bars, cool?  Oh, BTW, just want everyone to know I got mad props for the answer, just in this for the practice

[vitodeluca]

Should I post the original verse I wrote for ya, or spit somethin' new?  I just don't wanna be classified as a pre writer or a biter, ya know, although I never got a chance to get input on that one or get it voted on?  I can write somethin' new, ....whaddya think?

[vitodeluca]

by chance my first challenge came un "answered" I'll concede that,
but I posted a verse anyway just for the feedback (1)
so I'm back again like cancer to step into the ring
so let's get to this like brutis and do the damn thing,

lemme take a second to explain I got plenty of shit on the brain
drivin' me insane, givin' me migraines like hangovers from night train, (2)
don't think I'd use the same shit over again, I got new shit to explain
you don't need to check or inspect this chin check to make sure it's in spec,
I got metaphors on deck so don't spect me to not come correct

takin' a second to wreck a prepubescent adolescent,
no wonder your record consists "of coming in seconds" (3)
can't win, only one on the board too young for olsen twins,
wack mc couldn't be mvp if he was rollin' with staga lee (4)
couldn't rap even if he worked at a burrito factory,
short out your synapses and snap your back faster than extasy tablets,
I rip every track I'm on like a finger nail running through your nylons, yeah,
you're sweeter than elton john sittin' on a ding dong with a ballerina dress on
turnin' "the answer" into "tiny dancer" got no chance a' makin' it through this one (5)
vito's back again, rippin' through the pack again, makin' you change your name to sir Q and back again
undertaker putting ya "down under" and rippin' ya asunder, makin' ya wonder "what happened man?" (6)

sayin' adios amigo, you got no flow like a one john hoe
when I scream "como me llamo" as I rip through your barrio (7)
answer don't want no mo' of what I got in store,
now ya thinkin' an wishin'  I had posted my original

1) I challenged answer before and posted a verse I wrote for him just to get his input
2) Night train is this cheap ass alcohol that gives you wicked hangovers
3) His age is listed as 14, and youngsters are not know for their stamina/ also coming in second as in losing
4) Rollin' with MVP, new song by this dude named Stagga Lee
5) Tiny Dancer is an elton john song
6) Profile says he's from Australia
7) spanish for "what's my name"

[T.J.]

this fool's so eager-to-please, taking attention away from his meagre-lil-keys/
on your nuts like pubic hairs givin head non stop, no wonder he's weak-in-tha-knees/
you gettin jacked-son (jackson) like tito, vito, dont react-son, or get slapped-sum/1
bringin whack ak-shun, like your girlfriend says, when the heat's there u cant-cum/ (ahahaha)

4 bar servings coz u cant take it all once

14-years-old, and i can still count better than u, after 14-beers-cold/
too uneducated, torturing kids like Brotha Lynch, youre haunting-fears-told/
u fell 4 lines over-board, your mind overloaded, stalled, now im your over-lord/
i own ya ass, in 2 years time you'll be a petty urban legend, ya story over-told/

glad you addressed my ability to give you mi-graines, coz your small mind's-tame/
u fell victim to mind-games, u must be hallucinatin, u cant tell ya rhymes-lame/
a modest rapper, an elton john fan, everyone run and cover your asses!!/
this guys so much of a fag, i bet he rocks eltons glasses!!!/ (ahahaha)

the final slaying

last lines are the wreckoning, makin this kat go boom!/ (explosion)2
my shit's tighter than a flat chested teen bitches poon/
time to knock this nut off his platform, nobody gonna catch you (cashew)/
yeah foreign languages are cool, "tha pasna gamieses imana sou"/3

most of this was straight forward, but theres a few that need explaining.
explanations:
1-tito jackson is from the jackson five.
2-a band called boomkat got a song in the charts called "The Wreckoning"
3-go ask a greek what it means.

[White-Chocolate]

like usual the answer comes hard hittin' but im'a have to go with vito on this one dude, he's flow was flowin', this shit right heree was titeee

"takin' a second to wreck a prepubescent adolescent,
no wonder your record consists "of coming in seconds" (3)
can't win, only one on the board too young for olsen twins,
wack mc couldn't be mvp if he was rollin' with staga lee (4)
couldn't rap even if he worked at a burrito factory,
short out your synapses and snap your back faster than extasy tablets,
I rip every track I'm on like a finger nail running through your nylons, yeah,
you're sweeter than elton john sittin' on a ding dong with a ballerina dress on
turnin' "the answer" into "tiny dancer" got no chance a' makin' it through this one (5)
vito's back again, rippin' through the pack again, makin' you change your name to sir Q and back again
undertaker putting ya "down under" and rippin' ya asunder, makin' ya wonder "what happened man?" (6)"

vote - vito

[·SiNiStEr·]

kk ima get my vote on..

vito - hittin verse man, i like the punches and metas overall a solid verse just lackin multis.

answer - damn yo.. you gettin mad lately, i see you droppin better shit every day. solid punches, decent multis.

damn this was a hella tight battle and i enjoyed readin it.. hehehe truthfully i didnt think this was some heat but once i read it, mad props to both of yall.

each verse had its high points but essentially they were the same hittin-wise and metas.. but answer threw in some multis.. basically the only difference in the verses and that will make my decision.. lol.. some funny bars in there too.. dope verses yall.

vote  -  the answer

[vitodeluca]

Damn,this shit is close, sinister and white chocolate thanks for the inputs, I added a footnote today that somehow didn't get in there (?).  Anyways, answer, tight verse man, ya got me nervous!  Quick question tho, Sin, you said I got no multis in my rhyme?  "take a second to wreck a prepubescent adolescent" doesn't count?  Or "elton john sittin on a ding dong with a ballerina dress on"?  Just wonderin' cause I might have my definition wrong...

[T.J.]

 Quick question tho, Sin, you said I got no multis in my rhyme?  "take a second to wreck a prepubescent adolescent" doesn't count?  Or "elton john sittin on a ding dong with a ballerina dress on"?  Just wonderin' cause I might have my definition wrong...

the prepubescent can be classified as a multi, but i dont think the other one can coz it sorta needs more rhyming syllables other than john, dong and on.... know what i mean

its all good tho
1-1

[da_notorious_mack]

i gotta give this to vito.....that "take a second to wreck a prepubescent adolescent" was hot...i really feelin the flow....but fareal both u guys gettin good...

[.:TimeLock:.]

yo my vote goes to vito every thing he said i got with out having to read his foot notes his ending was not all that strong but still did a better vesre in my opinion

vote= vito

[vitodeluca]

Allright, 3-1, thanks for the votes guys...keep votin' everyone...

[·SiNiStEr·]

multi..

ill put this bitch-in-class//
was "scractchy" so he had an itch-in-ass//

weak shit but ya get the point..

[vitodeluca]

Cool, I hear ya, I tried to use more multis in my battle against Mack, I switched my style up a little.

[T.J.]

yo its 3-1..... keep the votes coming!!!

[.:DayGoStyLz:.]

Good battle yall. But i gotta give this to Vito also. He had sum pretty tight metas in there. The "burrito factory" line was comedy. Answer had a tight verse, but i jus felt Vito's creativity more. Also, Answer...try not to write off the first MC's verse when u spit, ie. the "Migraine" shit. It puts the first MC at a disadvantage, and voters will take that into account. Good shit tho yall, keep spittin.

vote- Vito