lost titan -vs- mack

[Lost Titan]

rules
15-20 lines
3 votes ko
4 votes win
votes explain
dont matter who spits first

[da_notorious_mack]

You a Lost Titan,you flopped-writing..
posted "if you doubt me" we said stop-biting!..[1]
so drop-the-mic-an,watch-my-anthologies..
about rocks,glocks-an-robberies,u not stoppin-me..
impossibly,my genorosity,will stop me droppin-thee..
atomically,ill take you apart,go ahead-bring-ya-boys-an..
ill fire shots so many times,yall will die from lead-poisoning..
how could you try to recreate the art-of-us..
and like the dudes in ya sig,ill banish you to Tartarus..[2]
i was friendly-ya-cunt,but it deadly-to-front..
ya didnt know?im april's emcee-a-the-month...
ill bruise-cats,abuse-facts,twist um,put you ina bad-position
im sorry this dude so phony...i had-to-diss-him
and when i kill him no one miss-him,6 feet deep,he gone fishing!
an no one will come to his wake after I shred-his-organs
Cause "kids sleep on Lost" like he rest on a single bed with seven-orphans!
Dude we all know you bite,just dont risk-ya-health
cus if you diss me bout bitingt,like dre said "ya diss Mack,ya diss ya self"


[1]he posted a key called "if you doubt me"....many people thought it was bitten
[2]peep his sig

[Lost Titan]

i'll have it up later today or tomorrow

[da_notorious_mack]

up

[Lost Titan]

it should be up today but if not it will be up by monday
i got pratice and a game this weekend so i'm kinda busy

[da_notorious_mack]

aiight...

[vitodeluca]

tight verse mack...

[Lost Titan]

I see how you flowing man and I know u ain't real/
Man flowing tough words won't conceal
Your true homo tendencies/
If it was possible you'd have 3 kids and another pregnancy/
I sick of your verses/
U want to listen to my curses/
I'll make you hold a glock to your head and squeeze till your brain disperses/
I'm that gangsta that don’t show no remorse/
Aiming at your head is my number resource/
Weapon of choice it don’t matter/
Fist or bullet hit your face and its shatters/
I see str8 through your lines they are all just lies/
See with me anything that can happen death defies/
Like the way I'm driving that car you’re a   if it s to fast/
Or the way I hold up my glock it blast blast/
And if you doubt me challenge and I'll blast last/
I'm sick of hearing your voice/
Your stuff ain't worthy to take one slice/
Mack you’re a fag but you got skills/
I'm by myself that how G's get killed/
Respect for the offer but it ain't me/
I ain't never needed any ones help to get here you see/

[Kill]

Lost, you've improved considerably since you first spit here, but mack's still better; even though some of his multis confused me tryina flow it with different numbers of syllables that shit was like a quick and effective attack with better punches and rhymes. nice battle

VOTE = MACK

[vitodeluca]

Lost titan= You're shit is gettin' a whole lot better, your verse flowed real well.  You could still stand to incorporate some multis into your verses, ya know?  Still though, I liked your verse

Mack= Shit man, you mulits and flow are real tight, I like the way you use better vocab in your rhymes and everything.  I got nothing negative to say about your verse, plus I like your style of writin'

Vote=Mack

[Lost Titan]

yo one more vote

[Franchise3]

mack=good flow nice vocab
lost=simplistic but aight
Vote=mack

[Lost Titan]

yo good battle