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T.J.

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~Gate-crashers~ (keystyle)
« on: May 20, 2003, 01:27:27 AM »
just a lil keystyle i wrote about gatecrashers....



its party time, im a wild card invite drinkin bacardi lime/
the gatecrashers rockin up now, and it's hardly nine/
first i'm thinkin ignore them fools and let the party go on/
then this girl gets dumped in the pool, the crowd was ho-hum/
the gatecrashers start shouting, smashin everything they found/
then that horrid sound, a gun gets fired and a body hits the ground/
metal butterflies from beretta coccoons flew at building walls/
another bullet connected to an adolescent, the lil thing falls/
the kid's brother ran screaming, addressed the problem, actin frantic/
the party holder getting manic, trying to surpress the fighting in panic/
the guy coppin head in the bathroom zipped his pants up with speed/
steps out the door with his girl, BANG! the crashers screamin "BLEED"/
the groupies of the crowd turn a blind eye and start runnin/
those armed with glocks let out a sigh and start gunnin/

the aftermath

5 innocent people dead, the culprits left untouched and unfound/
surely the neighbours were in on this, claims they never heard a gun sound/
no investigation was ran, families and friends left scarred/
as for the ones who fought back? theyre servin a few months behind bars/
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Re:~Gate-crashers~ (keystyle)
« Reply #1 on: May 20, 2003, 02:57:52 AM »
not bad man.. it was a little different from what we usually see on here.. I liked it.
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Re:~Gate-crashers~ (keystyle)
« Reply #2 on: May 20, 2003, 04:51:01 AM »
nice piece...you really got potential
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Re:~Gate-crashers~ (keystyle)
« Reply #3 on: May 20, 2003, 08:01:19 AM »
yeh really man, nice work. keep writin
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Re:~Gate-crashers~ (keystyle)
« Reply #4 on: May 20, 2003, 04:54:29 PM »
tru story?

o man thats fuckt up.. i wouldnt let it get that far.

anyway.. nice piece even tho it put me in a bad mood
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Re:~Gate-crashers~ (keystyle)
« Reply #5 on: May 20, 2003, 09:49:17 PM »
Damn that was heavy bro, tight tho, real good metahphors, butterflys and all that.  Hope that shit ain't true..
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Re:~Gate-crashers~ (keystyle)
« Reply #6 on: May 21, 2003, 05:56:12 AM »
LOL..... nah it wasnt a true story, but u know whenever u go to a party and motherfuckers always wreck it for everyone? it just pisses me off... thought i might rap on what they can do in some circumstances.

thanx for the feedback, keep it comin
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Re:~Gate-crashers~ (keystyle)
« Reply #7 on: May 22, 2003, 03:12:17 AM »
hey everyone, i might make this in audio, i got an ideal beat for it too... anyone think it will work?
« Last Edit: May 22, 2003, 03:41:07 AM by the an$wer »
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Re:~Gate-crashers~ (keystyle)
« Reply #8 on: May 22, 2003, 04:00:22 AM »
Quote from: ·SiNiStEr· on May 20, 2003, 04:54:29 PM
anyway.. nice piece even tho it put me in a bad mood
Pretty good piece
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Re:~Gate-crashers~ (keystyle)
« Reply #9 on: May 22, 2003, 06:19:36 AM »
hell yeh dawg, record that shit, upload that shit and let us download the shit   ;D
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