Sinister vs Mack

[da_notorious_mack]

15 bars
no dick votes/m dogg votes
who spitting first?

[·SiNiStEr·]

15 bars max or even?

you spit first.. ya write quick

[da_notorious_mack]

imma murder this man....


You bout to fell this vets-wrath,when my techs-blast..
if you blow up,well meet-again on celebrity death-match..
did ya get-that?better respect-Mack,like Aretha-Franklin..
before i destroy elite-plans-an..
decimate their best-spitter,you the only hot one,the rest-bitter..[1]
tryin ta come at me but this vet-quicker..
dude ya time-due,you know i can out rhyme-you..
Kal,Tech,Maestro,you can probably be cloud nine-too!..
go on jump ship an destroy elite for-me..
Sin could be in "porn",he still wudnt be a "thug" Or "G"..{orgy}
these kids aint got luv-fa-me,so i have to mention-war..
so shots plug Sin from a distance like extension-cords..
you carried weapons-at-first,now you shook-an-frightened..
stay reppin-the-burbs,stay out the hood like they took-ya-license..
So you Mr Sinister? dont be suprised if i leave you "X"ed-out...[2]
i aint even lookin at you...im lookin at the next-bout..


[1]Sinister been called elites future by m dogg.....the rest jus sorta bitter bout tone breakin up their kru

[2]Mr Sinister was a villian in the X-Men


Get at it soon...i wanna see your verse should be hot....

[·SiNiStEr·]

fa sho homie..

Aight lez go

~Bashin mack-cliques with muh sinister tactics, DA full of wack-tricks like ya dallas mavericks//
~I got newbies depressin-me, vets surpressin-me, bitches on my nuts incessantly//
~When I spit these walls-are-shakin, balls-are-breakin, even bathroom stalls-are-shakin//
~Ya couldnt "drop personals" if ya mishandled a phone-book, Sinister the elite Lone-Wolf, walked in the door and even tone-moved//
~Ill help ya "drop tight shit" and partially sew-up-ya-rectum, im a radioactive kamikaze after i blow-up-n-infect-'em//
~Dropped once and ya got an ejection, newbs toss up shit and i reject-'em, a lyrikal reflection//
~Its a feat to beat me, you cant compete with Elite completely, ya gots to cheat to make meat of me, not likin me? join the commitee//
~Lyrikally hazin and blazin people, mutha fucka im amazin people, eat cats fah lunch like im grazin people//
~You desperate for backup like givin meth-to-a-female, e~gangsta thought he was hard till he suffered a death-by-an-email//
~Ya in violation of the compilation of Elite, ya fallin-game might be the reason why you now reppin tha hall-of-shame//
~Like an aorta marathon im racin'-hearts, a bad wind fixin to blow mack out like hastened-farts//
~Ya patience-starts to weaken, my rhymes so frantic, feelin tantric, Mack "fell off" when he bit like a man-tick//
~"Props" to ya for bein one of the only cats in herre with wins in double-digits, but ya cant 'raise up' to me like youz a troubled-midget//

Haha.. I'm done

Good battle Mack.. lez get some votes up in herre!

[vitodeluca]

Mack: Flow was real tight (I always say tell ya that, lol) and I like you don't use overly long bars in your battle freestyles.  I dug your metas too, the extension cord one was pretty comedy.  You didn't really use any personals though, save talkin' about him being in Elite, which didn't really hit that hard.  Your other punches were pretty good though.

Sin:  You had some real nice multis and good metas too.  I liked the sew up ya rectum line, funny shiznit.  Some of your lines didn't really make sense at the expense of rhyming, i.e. "feeling tantric" (?) and "givin' meth to a female", or maybe I'm just not getting it.  Still, your flow was tight and I felt like you incorporated a few more personals, i.e. Hall of shame, dallas mavericks, e-gangsta/death by email, bit like a man-tick, ect. although the biting thing on mack is something you yourself have said is played out. Overall, good verse, gotta give it to ya.

Vote=Sinister

[·SiNiStEr·]

true vito.. im glad you noticed that..

i purposely made a small hint of mack bitin cuz all the other battle verses against him glorify that he bit here and there. well the shits over.. hes been clean for a while.. and i can find anything to beat him for.. just glad ya noticed that.

more votes plz

peace

[.:DayGoStyLz:.]

good battle yall...

gonna keep this simple...

Multis-Tie, all of Macks connected, some of Sin's didnt. But Sin had sum more complex ones in there also. So i give it a tie.
Metas-Sinister, good shit man
Flow-Mack
Punches-Sinister
Personals-Mack, had about the same amount...but i felt his more.
WordPlay-Tie

yall goan hate me....but i gotta give this shit a tie for right now. When i get back, if this shit is still hurtin for votes ill look over tha shit again and decide.

peace

[da_notorious_mack]

no diggity that 2-1 sin,or still 1-0?

[Kill]

Hmm, difficult

Mack - Nice verse there. Started off with a rather mediocre line, but then you came with some nice punches and the flow was pretty dope cause unlike in some other battles your multis were more or less immaculate. you didn't hit that hard though, lines like that extension cord shit or the X-Men reference were funny but nuthin hard-hittin

Sinister - Good work too. Mack's flow was considerably better then yours, which is also cause he often keeps it kinda simple though. You came with a more complex verse as for vocab, structure ands punches. This makes votin kinda difficult...you'd have had the opportunity to kill him by comin with hard personals, but you didn't really either

sorry, I can't decide. If there won't be any votes comin in anymore I'ma cum back and do so though. But for now...

VOTE = TIE

['Illicit']

well overall I liked Macks verse more, shit was flawless in flow, multis were great, punches good but the personals kinda missing, Sinister had a more complex vocab and the flow, for me, sometimes hard to follow, but his personals n punches hit harder n more often than Macks, thats why battle-wise, Sinister took this but Macks shit jus sounded better

vote: Sinister

[·SiNiStEr·]

lol aight..


mack i guess we gots to decide on whether a tie counts for both or null..

oh well.. yall are right about my lack of personals but him bitin is so fucken played out i kept it general.. and i was feeelin lazy to do research.

[·SiNiStEr·]

ahh yes..


and sorry i did kinda bad yall.. i felt i wasnt really up to par..

uppin fa votes anyway

[·SiNiStEr·]

dun let me down now.. i vote on yalls shit

[T.J.]

vote-sinister

hit harder, mack had the lil bit of an edge on the flow, but sinister hit much harder and made up for it. both of you had some tight multis and some good wordplay, but sinister took this purely because he hit harder than mack and everything else was balanced.

nice battle

[·SiNiStEr·]

thats 3-0 not counting ties, what was the vote limit? lol


thanks to everyone who voted, even you 2 people who voted for a tie, at least yall droppin feedback which is most appreciated.

mack lemme know wuz up wit da votes.