volume

[Qurate-L]

im gunna turn this audio if i get good feedback

volume
some artists lyrically undetermined/
like a preacher giving his children sermons/
telling people whats right or wrong/
while they sittin there smokin a bong/
and they spittin up new lyrics for songs/
while i am racking my mind for unheard/
vile lyin shit packing words that you learned/
while i was dissing your appearance/
its like your at a bank and aint got no clearance/
my words are feared reveered as a sin/
i must be to wierd in my style to know where i bin/
tell me what am i doing up on stage with a mic/
when all i really want to do is rage in a fight/
i ripped shit up when i was told to quit/
i bin tipped i skipped my life im cold i spit/
about what i know and see/
no matter how much they hate what i be/
i continue although i bin ripped by emcees/
ive done in you with a skipped sensation/
my mind is hard as stone i can render a nation/
destroy it with my own hands i dont care how many lands/
i destroy i deploy mercenary troops in bands/
an elite force you must avoid my wrath/
a decietful course paranoid a dangerous path/
i still live it untill the vile end lend my fist my right/
i will give shrill freestyle shit bend and twist till I die in a fight/

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CHORUS
listen as I spit my shrill vile lyrics/
jus then I hit my ill style fear it/
just like when your car went BOOM/
so will your stereo as I turn up the volume/
oh ya forgot to mention that was me not you/
that fucked up your life its true/
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Verse 2
You think you can turn it up/
Time to get down cuz you suck/
Listen to the volume of the words you speak/
Because ill entomb you youll tweak when you seek/
A quiet place to hide I employed an empire to bring it down/
Started a riot I lied I destroyed the entire town/
Just had to pump up the music/
And everyones about to lose it/
Qurate-L is here to keep this from getting outta control/
fuck this shit Ill bring the power up to full/
your arguing over who beat Ras Kass/
Imitating the shit you saw on jackass/
You people always trying to start your career as a beat writer/
let me tell you this you should just stick to bein feared as a street fighter/
theres bin another murder sighting/
But I went through this shit faster then lightnin
Jus like my words im unseen/
Listen here I beat your bitch ass and im only a teen/

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CHORUS
listen as I spit my shrill vile lyrics/
jus then I hit my ill style fear it/
just like when your car went BOOM/
so will your stereo as I turn up the volume/
oh ya forgot to mention that was me not you/
that fucked up your life its true/
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Verse 3
Lets just say im pissed at everyone/
Sick of bein dissed I risked it all and im done/
from the start fine ill finish you off with a gun/
fuck it ill just bring new rap shit from the heart/
Sharp like the edge of a blade/
They told me it was just a phase/
Cant take much more of it im just gonna blaze/
And when im finished ill raze/
Every buildin thats in my line of  site/
Light up the torch this shits gonna burn all night/
I didnt even have to earn the right/
Jus had to grab some matches/
And strike like a hawk at night/
The end of the third verse/
Finally huh this shits worse then a curse/
And its bin that way since birth/
The earth has always bin hatin/
Fuck this shit im done debatin/
What im gonna do in the next 10 years/
Im just gonna sit here and right rhymes against queers/

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CHORUS
listen as I spit my shrill vile lyrics/
jus then I hit my ill style fear it/
just like when your car went BOOM/
so will your stereo as I turn up the volume/
oh ya forgot to mention that was me not you/
that fucked up your life its true/
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Verse 4
And thats what happens when you let shit get outta control
You start off rappin then you finish and set loose yer soul/
Its a whole lotta nothin happenin for a reason/
Every day every year every season/
Still gonna be at the same place you were at from the start/
Cuz you got no deal you feel you worthless you say you aint smart/
Listen to me my stage name is Qurate to the L/
And after all ive done and goin straight to hell/
Im the lyrical messenger of death/
More powerful then crack, cocaine, or crystal meth/
And now the powers jus bin brought down/
And now the volumes gone got no sound...

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CHORUS
listen as I spit my shrill vile lyrics/
jus then I hit my ill style fear it/
just like when your car went BOOM/
so will your stereo will as I turn up the volume/
oh ya forgot to mention that was me not you/
that fucked up your life its true/
just like when your car went BOOM/
so will your stereo as I turn up the v.o..l..u..m..e/
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jus to let u all know ive only bin in this 4 about a month or 2 its long  but this is 4 a audio

[Qurate-L]

i need a rating from 1-10 on this 2 this is ma first drop here

[Reef]

If you get the right beat you could make a good auido out of that. It wasnt a bad rhyme.. i'd give it a 6 or 7 out of 10... Its obviously written for auido.. just needs a few modifications for it to flow a bit better..

[Qurate-L]

ya i know i still gotta fix it up a bit that was pretty much jus what i first thought up i got my cousin workin on a beat 4 it ne way thx for the feedback

[T.J.]

whooops.... i accidentaly clicked on "you suck"  


j/k, it was alright, it would sound good in audio with a good beat.

[Qurate-L]

ya i got a beat thas gonna be made 4 it from my cousin so i jus hope he makes it soon

[Juda]

 ye guy, those lyrics were hype, are u gonna post the track on here when itz dun, and if so give me a holla when finished. Gj man
                                                                  Ez

[Qurate-L]

ya ima post it here whenim done but itll b a while since im still waitin 2 get the beat back might b a week or 2