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Airran

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Who will it be?
« on: June 07, 2003, 06:00:32 AM »
To days the day that she comes back//
i cant stop thinking about her she like a new track//
I still want her but does she want me//
i cant wait till me and her become we//
My heads in a trance, i dont know what to do//
i need to talk to sum one but i dont know who//
She has to pick witch one will it be//
it cant be him so i geuss it'll be me//
She gave him a change and he fuck-it-up//
when he put him hands on her, now its time for her to-wise-up//
He shoudnt of hit her when he was in a cop//
coz now i is after him and i ant gonna stop//
I'll make him wish that he was dead//
when i finished there will be nothink left of him, no even his street cerd//
I'm gonna stamp on him face and leave him for dead//
then the magets can finish him, and munch on him head//
He ant gonna do it again, after i finished//
he will dead and buried with body deminished//
 


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Ignyte

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Re:Who will it be?
« Reply #1 on: June 07, 2003, 10:33:19 AM »
pretty cool, a bit simple which you gotta work on, and maybe some multis too. keep droppin tho
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Coz you see at the age of birth, we was contaminated with the caucasions curse/
I dont know what came first, the pententiary or the purse/
But I aint into that crap, I'd rather lay back and start working on my raps/
While you niggas stay strapped, with a hoe on your lap, with a dirty puss and crack/
While I stay intact with my people, and carry the mic which is lethal/
 

Reef

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Re:Who will it be?
« Reply #2 on: June 07, 2003, 11:28:58 AM »
Quote from: Ignyte aka. Tha O-triple-Z scholla' on June 07, 2003, 10:33:19 AM
pretty cool, a bit simple which you gotta work on, and maybe some multis too. keep droppin tho
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Airran

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Re:Who will it be?
« Reply #3 on: June 07, 2003, 03:29:34 PM »
Hey Ignyte, thx for the advice. I will have to try it next time. Peace out airran
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Inspectah

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Re:Who will it be?
« Reply #4 on: June 07, 2003, 03:32:58 PM »
Ayo.. that was a nice piece man.. i liked it, simple yea, but its not about talent, its how you get your views, and feelings out it was good for what its worth to you!

Peace, Keep blessing!
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