Who will it be?

[Airran]

To days the day that she comes back//
i cant stop thinking about her she like a new track//
I still want her but does she want me//
i cant wait till me and her become we//
My heads in a trance, i dont know what to do//
i need to talk to sum one but i dont know who//
She has to pick witch one will it be//
it cant be him so i geuss it'll be me//
She gave him a change and he fuck-it-up//
when he put him hands on her, now its time for her to-wise-up//
He shoudnt of hit her when he was in a cop//
coz now i is after him and i ant gonna stop//
I'll make him wish that he was dead//
when i finished there will be nothink left of him, no even his street cerd//
I'm gonna stamp on him face and leave him for dead//
then the magets can finish him, and munch on him head//
He ant gonna do it again, after i finished//
he will dead and buried with body deminished//
 

[Ignyte]

pretty cool, a bit simple which you gotta work on, and maybe some multis too. keep droppin tho

[Reef]

pretty cool, a bit simple which you gotta work on, and maybe some multis too. keep droppin tho

[Airran]

Hey Ignyte, thx for the advice. I will have to try it next time. Peace out airran

[Inspectah]

Ayo.. that was a nice piece man.. i liked it, simple yea, but its not about talent, its how you get your views, and feelings out it was good for what its worth to you!

Peace, Keep blessing!