new to the game(off tha top of my head plz rate)

[Qurate-L]

im new to the game/
and all this shit drives me insain/
all day im racking ma brain/
and im trying to refrain/
from using all these flames/
and its on me people place blame/
i obtained what talent i could/
if i could get through this shit would/
you have rated me any higher/
ive bin hated and noone will ever admire/
the new world, my own empire has now-started/
and every one of these mutha fuckas has bin out-smarted/
im just a fuckin newbie spitten shit here/
if you dont like my shit ,screw me, ive written shit to fear/
all you do is fuel me to raise my skill/
and i can kill fuckers and slay you at will/
i may not be ill but who gives a fuck/
when i shoot you bastards better duck/
in your eyes i cant bring anything to tha table/
when i die my lyrics are gonna be a fable/
its me here losin ma mind, its QurateL/
in a state of emergency puttin you through lyrical surgery/
even when you commit purgery, this is a ceartainty,/
that no matter how much you be hurtin me,/
youl never control anything bout what i be/
i may be bullshit to you jus fulla it in what i do/
to many come after the new chapter in this book/
ive bin shook ,fuckers, look/
in a battle i throw lyrical jabs then take you with a hook/
in a fight its still never enough to be ruff/
or youll just end leavin in cuffs/
its like in rap where you gotta have leading shit,/
fuck man, this games all about yer speeding wits/
it doesnt matter if you can come up wit slow spits/
but words can come at you knock you out like ether/
worse then when fuckers are trippin on reefer/
give you a seizure and you can never be-sure/
if its all worth it none of us are perfect lead-ers/
and its not always about us cursein either/
this is an intricate syndacate of verses/
givein it and liven in these curses/

aight i need some ratings

[Jac]

Too Long

[.:TimeLock:.]

no bad man flows pretty well

[Reef]

NIce flow.. keep spittin

[Qurate-L]

thx 4 tha feedback anyone else?