dpeons reply to notorious mack

[dpeon]

challenging me? u betta spit ya best line/
no sequel to the battle cuz it won't be a next time/
rip u like TECH N9NE/
from ya ass 2 ya appetite up to ya hairline/
don't try ta act smart cuz ill show u ya minds gone/
my flow is ageless killing u in a different bag/
call the national guard cuz this is a hostlie take over/
u probably jus a bitch in drag wit a make over/
tell ya momma tonight u coming to stay over/
cuz when im thru ya whole physical gone need a makeover/
i got a habit to grab an automatic/
and bust shotz choreagraphic to ya sternum and abdomin/
the notorious mack/
is notorious whack/
i'll be classified notorious when i smack u wit the strap/
so scrape up ya pennies to make a dolla, but compared 2 me u aint half/
ill cause a bloodbath on your behalf, complimentary of my CSN staff!!!!!

IM PRICELESS$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$

[da_notorious_mack]

Tryin to come up,i got-ya-loc,dont mean to rock-the-boat..
but yall wouldnt be Certified Sick even wit a doctors-note..
dope lyrics blocked-ya-throat,now you a choke-artist..
goin against this era's dope-bastard,this joke-past-it...
De peon gettin peed-on,prove everything you believe-wrong..
pass you round the VDK ranks like a weed-bong..
two hits-an-pass,the odour is potent cus ya shit-is-ass..
have you Ceftified Sick-at-last..
beef finished ina breeze-wit-the-pump,hold the trigger release-it-an-dump
have you Elephant style..tryna breathe-thru-the-trunk!

[da_notorious_mack]

uppin...

[Reef]

Shouldnt this be on the battle board?

[vitodeluca]

Shit, I'll vote on this anyway, I'm bored...

Mack took it, had the multis, the flow.  Obviously didn't put too much effort into, but dpeon, your metas were a little off, like rippin mack from his ass to his appetite?  Ummm, ok.  Plus, your rhyme scheme's a little simple for my taste..take over/make over/stay over/makeover.  Anyways

vote=Mack