Author Topic: Some new shit...gimme some feedback plz (Read 104 times)

Storm · « **on:** July 28, 2003, 12:16:18 PM »

My shits harder than concrete, straight from streets/
I’m here to bring heat, prove my shits elite/
So please take a seat and pay attention now/
Cause this is some classic shit that’s bout to go down.
I’m the motherfuckin Storm coming with thunder and rain/
Strike you down with lightning to cause you mad pain/
If you try to run than bitch you’ll be slain/
And I have no problem killing like you was Able and I was Cain/
If you still don’t understand then I’ll be glad to explain/
If you fuck with me than you better be insane/
Cause I got a gang of weapons to put you 6 feet deep/
And when its my life or your life its mine I plan to keep/
So peep this, Storm is takin over/
You betta give me respect and not the cold shoulder/
Cause you know I’ll crush your ass like a motherfuckin boulder/
So remember this shit so I don’t have to say that I told ya.

Please gimme some feedback and advice. Thanks.

Reef · « **Reply #1 on:** July 29, 2003, 02:10:28 AM »

It was cool man... Liked the flow.. keep spittin and elevatin'

|JEM|ILL| · « **Reply #2 on:** July 29, 2003, 12:50:52 PM »

Guessin you just started Keystylin?...lol it's all good homie...Lets see...Seems like your flows on point. I have no problem with it to tell you the truth just you need to drop a couple lines every now an' then that'll make people say "WHOA".

IM me or send me a private message if you want some advice...Keep illin