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Vitodeluca VS Jemuel
T.J.:
vote=jemuel
abstruse's explanation pretty much sums my vote up..... both hit equally hard.... but jem's flow was on which gave him that lil bit extra
'Illicit':
well, id say yall were pretty equal, Jems flow was flawless and his rhyme was quite consistent but it did indeed seem like the writers block took its toll on em, Vitos lines were long and the flow was, though only at first, hard to follow but in the end i caught onto it, in the middle it seemed to me like you was bout to fall off a inch but the last line was a killer finish imo, overall id have to say if jem woulda been on his regular basis of skill he prolly woulda took it maybe but vito was more dominating with his punches and multi-wise yall did equally well.
vote: Vito
·SiNiStEr·:
Jemuel - This verse was OK mange.. obvious you had writers block but ya still lackin personals. This was a average jemuel verse but maybe I bar lower.
Fav. Line -
It's pressure time Vito, I aint letting off till I hear an ass crack...
Snap ya spine in 2, and leave ya running off like a halfback!
Vito - Flow was a lil off and the content was hard to follow but the punches were still there. I can see the personals in there.
Fav. Line -
but I'll torture ya before anyone on the board figures out if ya wackness is nature or nurture, put ya outta your misery,// (4)
like who wants to be a millionaire, I'll put your life in order, you're born, start puberty, battle me, and ya history,//
Overall I think that Jem came a lil harder with the punches, but this was just an average verse from him.. Vito came with the personals and actually wrote for the battle, as far as I know Jemuel just broke out a prewrite, thats part of battlin..
Numbaz..
Jemuel - 3.75 / 5
Vito - 3.9 / 5
Vito took it from personals..
Vote : Vito
vitodeluca:
Cool, cool, thx. Ayight, that's 4-2, you wanna end this Jem?
|JEM|ILL|:
--- Quote from: ·SiNiStEr· on August 05, 2003, 04:32:48 PM ---Jemuel - This verse was OK mange.. obvious you had writers block but ya still lackin personals. This was a average jemuel verse but maybe I bar lower.
Fav. Line -
It's pressure time Vito, I aint letting off till I hear an ass crack...
Snap ya spine in 2, and leave ya running off like a halfback!
Vito - Flow was a lil off and the content was hard to follow but the punches were still there. I can see the personals in there.
Fav. Line -
but I'll torture ya before anyone on the board figures out if ya wackness is nature or nurture, put ya outta your misery,// (4)
like who wants to be a millionaire, I'll put your life in order, you're born, start puberty, battle me, and ya history,//
Overall I think that Jem came a lil harder with the punches, but this was just an average verse from him.. Vito came with the personals and actually wrote for the battle, as far as I know Jemuel just broke out a prewrite, thats part of battlin..
Numbaz..
Jemuel - 3.75 / 5
Vito - 3.9 / 5
Vito took it from personals..
Vote : Vito
--- End quote ---
WTF!!!! He said my verse was better but voted against me cuz I slighted on personals? MAYBE YOU SHOULD RE READ THE SHIT...no it aint over...shit like that aint right...
The Vito's Fake line was a personal and the "Mike Tyson" line was cuz lately his shitz been fallin off...Im startin to think folks dont even read the verses no more...Like that one cat who said i aint had multies in one battle when every line began and ended with one...
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