Bez vs. Jem

[bez]

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[|JEM|ILL|]

Writers Fuckin Blockz?

Your so wack, kids who would rip you bitch? theres countless emcees...
Like scuba divers at the wrong depth, son ya out a ya league!!!

Landing a slap when I snap in a violent burst
Ya face’ll be wearing palms like a hawaiian shirt!!
When it comes to battles..you lack the mentality..
Your spine is an example..How I snap cats back"s" into reality!!
I'm grymee dawg..straight leave ya Hands broiled...
Cuz When I aluminum wrap ya verses..all ya plans 'll be foiled..
Sit down when I give u the news..u lose..hope ya can stand it..
Cuz I'll hang your ass from a tree..Just Like some damn Hammocks...
Throw ya verse in the junkyard dawg..I'm here to straight dismantle..
I'ma leave more "Nicks-in"(Nixon) ya..than the watergate scandal..

[bez]

Yo aint no Jem, diamond-never, you a ruby without tha wax//
I glisten wit brilliance like Jay Z cos diamonds are forever, flowin smoothly throughout the tracks//
Skills-improvin everytime I battle cos like tony-the-tiger I'm Greeeeeeeat//
Sick of the hate, I got a gun with one bullet if only-ta-fire at ya mate//
I'm so evil, they devil's jealous of me, packin more flames than a Burger-King-Wopper//
You nottin but a weasel another slaves in chains as I'm murdering ya like Hopper//
So pop quiz hot shot, what you gunna do when this battle over and dun wit//
You've been beaten by a -26 karma, Uk, dumb kid?, you so stupid//
Why you not think that when I have to I can pull out all stops//
And murder that pop shit you drops like you was on top of the pops//

[bez]

Nice battle Jem, votes!!

[ZILLA THA GOODFELLA]

Ya face’ll be wearing palms like a hawaiian shirt!!

LOL.....y'all kno wat that means!!!

[|JEM|ILL|]

Ya face’ll be wearing palms like a hawaiian shirt!!

LOL.....y'all kno wat that means!!!

That I wrote it on Microsoft Word? yea...

[abstruse]

Jem - Nice verse. The metas and wordplay were on point, you didn't have many multies but its cool. The punches were on point, although they could have been used at anyone. Ya lack personals. Overall - 4

Fav line...

Landing a slap when I snap in a violent burst
Ya face'll be wearing palms like a hawaiian shirt!!

Bez - Coo verse. The metas and wordplay werne't really there. I found you were reppin yourself the first 4 bars or so. Ya need to work on your punches dawwg, I know you keystyle, but punches make or break battles, and I didn't see any witty ones. Overall - 3.5

Fav line...

I'm so evil, they devil's jealous of me, packin more flames than a Burger-King-Wopper//
You nottin but a weasel another slaves in chains as I'm murdering ya like Hopper//

Overall Vote - Jem[/color]

[vitodeluca]

Jem, good verse, ya punches are startin' to sound a little familiar tho, prolly cause you battlin' like 4 peeps right now, LOL. Still, solid verse, familiar style, good multis, overall I'd say 4/5

Bez-ya shit's gettin' better put ya still could come with some harder punches.  A better verse than usual,  but at some parts not easy to understand, i.e. "ruby without the wax"?  Anyhow, I'd say 3.7/5 or so, so vote goes to Jem

Vote=Jem

[bez]

Jem, good verse, ya punches are startin' to sound a little familiar tho, prolly cause you battlin' like 4 peeps right now, LOL. Still, solid verse, familiar style, good multis, overall I'd say 4/5

Bez-ya shit's gettin' better put ya still could come with some harder punches.  A better verse than usual,  but at some parts not easy to understand, i.e. "ruby without the wax"?  Anyhow, I'd say 3.7/5 or so, so vote goes to Jem

Vote=Jem

Ruby Wax is a famous tv presenter here in Britain.

I really cant understand what voting goes on in this forum, seems to change everytime I drop a rhyme.

[vitodeluca]

Well, seein' as I live in the US, I don't know that little tidbit.  I voted honestly tho, always do...basically the main shortcoming of your verse was your punches didn't hit that hard, that's all.

[vitodeluca]

ps bez, I don't see you droppin that many votes up in here...

[abstruse]

Yeh fo real man, its nothin against ya, you been coo lately, but ya verse lacked punches. Ya need to peep Punchlines 101 man fo real, and thats not degrading your keystyle skills, cuz those are good, but ya battle techniques can be improved.

[bez]

Thats why I keep battlin so I can improve my skills, I actually wanna get good at this shit.

Theres no point in me voting if I dont really know what a battle verse is yet, I will prob only vote on multies and flow so it wouldent be fair to the battlers, but if people want me to vote on their shit they shud let me know personally like, I would be glad to.

[Slim-x]

Vote : Bez

[C-Bizz]

I would have to vote for jemuel for the same reasons as vito and them. Bez just lacked the multis and punches.