My best song (probably one of my last for a while)

[VitorJ]

Give me a ONE on ONE

I want everyone to listen to this track because it's the best one I've ever recorded. I produced the beat, wrote the lyrics and basically done everything myself. The song is dedicated to some brainless wannabe thugs that were beating me up on a party in the winter. Oh and I'm not a weak pussy - it was like 10 against 1.
Listen to it and tell me what you think. Tell me I'm wack and I will laugh because I know it's good but I just wanna hear your opinion.


hi fi

lo fi

mp3

[Adriano]

you will laugh......


its wack
NO flow.....FUCKIN BAD production....BAD lyrics

pz

[Suga Foot]

I couldn't even listen to the whole thing.  The quality of it is horrible.

[VitorJ]

haha

Aight, ya made me laugh

But anyways, I respect your opinion - I know it's not studio quality but I don't think the quality is that bad, you must have some fucked up speakers. I've only had positive feedback on this yet so it's ok if you don't like it.

[Suga Foot]

you must have some fucked up speakers.

I'm thinkin it's the other way around.  I have real studio speakers.  The beat is distorted.  Turn the kick and the bass down.  Just mix it better.

[T.J.]

the beat's fucked.

[Adriano]

you must have some fucked up speakers.

I'm thinkin it's the other way around.  I have real studio speakers.  The beat is distorted.  Turn the kick and the bass down.  Just mix it better.

[lil_RIPsta]

the church organ music kills it off, reminds me of "goto sleep" for sum reason, the music is WAY TOO LOUD in comparrison can barely hear ya over it. the beats fucked as the uvas say....

u start the 2nd verse too fast after the chorus so it sounds weird. i can barely tell wot the lyrics sayin but sounds like same ol bullshit   ima do this ima do that blah blah blah....

lmao at the punchbag noises at end! hahaha

im sure i heard a bubba sparxx line in there aswell.. not 100% tho.  

its a decent song mate but to me it sounds like you tryna be the next eminem. you said he "sold out" pmsl n u bitin his style! lmfao .. ah well. u can only get better :p

i was honest ....

[[Stoned]Jesus H. Christ[Wheat]]

the church organ music kills it off, reminds me of "goto sleep" for sum reason, the music is WAY TOO LOUD in comparrison can barely hear ya over it. the beats fucked as the uvas say....

u start the 2nd verse too fast after the chorus so it sounds weird. i can barely tell wot the lyrics sayin but sounds like same ol bullshit   ima do this ima do that blah blah blah....

lmao at the punchbag noises at end! hahaha

im sure i heard a bubba sparxx line in there aswell.. not 100% tho.  

its a decent song mate but to me it sounds like you tryna be the next eminem. you said he "sold out" pmsl n u bitin his style! lmfao .. ah well. u can only get better :p

i was honest ....

^^^what he said