Bez Vs. Ill-Logical (BEZ WINS!!)

[bez]

Deadline, 6th Aug

Maximum 20 bars!

[bez]

Want me to lend ya a hand-tramp, bet ya masturbate so much I swear you was a pros-ti-tute//
I heard ya left band-camp early when ya came across-the-flute//
The only time ya could "cum sick" is if ya threw up all of last-nights-evenin//
It consisted of a meal, a drink and then a blast-fulla-siemen//
If ya talkin about an eatin-disorder then I will-call-ya-ill//
Fingers stuck down ya throat, halfway to bein choaked like ya got a kill-ta-forfil//
Ya suck so much I've been confusin your shit for lypo//
Everything ya say is a mistake mite aswell be a typo//
Its alrite doh, cos my lyrics can cause a stampede like you were on safari//
Have your whole body shakin like ya name was Ali//
I ain't into playin-games, I'll put holes in ya like draculas fang-can//
Ya might be tough sayin-names, but swayin from a tree is the only way ya can hang-man//
Lyrics to snap ya back-in-to-place, leavin ya finally standin straight//
I'm harder than a slap-in-the-face off a pregnant bitch complain about her weight//
Causin an uproar on the streets like an nigerian peacekeeper//
To beat me ya got your work cut out for ya like an liberian grim reaper//
Leave ya feelin shamed, you'll go back to hidin, we'll see ya in a while//
Ya gettin fucked up like a named peodefile//
Leave ya feelin fucked as if ya a member from Hanson and its hurtin//
Make ya feel physically sick everytime ya see Richard Branson and virgin!//

[Jimmy Cash]

checkin in, i'll post tonight

[Jimmy Cash]

peep game

Please, dog, your rhymes are slap stick, get off mack’s dick, your fake like plastic, I can’t stand it//
It’s the return, you get burned when served with this hotness, I leave my mark, I leave you branded//
I believe you landed from planet fagot, in your space ship with little boys and butt bandits//
I know your type, someone who hangs around playgrounds looking at the “sights”//
You spend your nights beating off to tiger beat under a single light//
You’re a pathetic pedophile playing pussy on the net//
Koncept said it, you can bet I’ma vet when it comes to rippin’ necks//
Compare your self to me, then you will see who’s the better MC//
Cuz, cousin, I write nice rhymes nightly, I’m what you never can be//
Keep telling your self you can get better, but never better then me cuz I switch like the weather//
I got many styles for you to ingest//
If words are weapons then I got techs for your chest//
Watch your step, where ya steppin’ cuz Koncepts the best, fuck the rest//
Your about as good a jem in an ass kicking contest//
You got a battle record with no wins only losses, you’re an errand boy fucking around with mob bosses//
The cost is to much for your pockets, this battle you lost it//
Just remember I rule you, even after maxi tried to school you//
Fuck this battle, I’ve wasted enough time, I’m through, fools//

[bez]

Nice drop mayyyyyyne, so your ARE KONCEPT. lol

[vitodeluca]

Allright, I'll get my vote on

Bez:  Pretty good verse homie, your multis were actually refreshingly on point.  I think all of them were actually multis which is an improvement for ya.  Your punches and flow were a little uneven at times, for instance, the whole masterbation/prostitute punch didn't really make a lot of sense, but I liked the cum sick punch.  Flow was off/on in parts.  Overall, the one thing I would say is focus less on multis and more on punches, if you have dope punches, it'll go a long way to win battles. Still, pretty good.  I'd give ya like a 3.9/5

Ill Logical- I have to say that I wasn't really feelin' ya verse that much.  Your flow was off and I only saw like one personal in ya verse.  Also, I didn't think the punches really hit that hard. i.e. Watch your step, where ya steppin’ cuz Koncepts the best, fuck the rest//, I mean, rhymin' best with rest is a little played.  Liked the line about Jem in an ass kickin' contest, lol.  Overall, give it a 3.5/5

Vote-BEZ

[Disceptive AssAssin]

nah nah nah..
ill logical ripped it... simple.. bez try again..ill.. holla at me for a battle

vote= koncept

[T.J.]

Close battle.
Both verses were good, both had good multis and flow, punches were nice from both but the fact that koncept used a lot of faggot punches turned me off his verse.

vote-bez

[Disceptive AssAssin]

you gotta use fag punches against bez its a must

[bez]

you gotta use fag punches against bez its a must

lol, if thats all ya can cum up with mate then ya weak.  Thnere not 1 thing fag about me.  

[bez]

COME ON MORE VOTES PLEASE.  Even tho assasins explination of the verse was pure bullshit, basically cos I didnt allow him to drop his verse in the TT he voted against me in this battle, plain to see.  

[Disceptive AssAssin]

hears a tissue... hears a pistol..... you still wont do shit dood....

[Disceptive AssAssin]

and get nas out ya banner.... dickrider

[T.J.]

assasin, this isnt even your battle, so why are you responding like it is?

[bez]

Dickrider, how can you be a dickrider if you like somebody music.  YOur a real idiot.

VOTES PLEASE!!!!!

2-1 to me currently, thats if assasins vote actually counts.