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~:: ·SiNiStEr· ~vS~ Maestro ::~ Heavyweight Challenge!!!
Maestro Minded:
--- Quote from: ·SiNiStEr· on August 21, 2003, 08:15:08 PM ---~How you gonna bash USA when in Sweden all I gotta do is leech-fah-evidence, advance and beseech-ya-regiments, endin makin attempts to besiege-ya-president//
--- End quote ---
sweden do not have a president, we have a king
Maestro Minded:
one more thing to add...
since this is a title battle, i wish that elite & cloud~9 stays outta this... im sure sinister have the same point of view
ONETIME:
First of all, mad props to you both, both of you came heated. Im gona vote fairly.
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Maestro: DOPE VERSE MAN. The flow was on point, i liked the way you switched your flow, and the whole scheme was amazin, ur personals/punches were on point and hard.
FAV LINES:
~ Bringing more "heat" than Miami when sending "conduction-codes" - hacking his brain like Worm.Blaster, toggling "destruction-modes"//
~ Racing towards each over, Sin avoids "the-collision-course" - cuz even with an army, he couldn't stop my "de-molition-force"//
it was sicc IMO
I-BO : 4.50
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Sinister: YOU TOO MAN DOPE VERSE. You had a nice flow and everything,your multiz were real sicc. but after reading your rhymes it looked like that you were focusing on multiz alot and you didnt gave tht much attention to punches/personals, thts my opinion tho.....tite shite styll
FAV LINES:
~Im offerin a suggestion-fah-protection, although I feel obligated to deflate Maestro's erection-of-resurrection, itz time fah me to get to dissectin-ya-connection//
~End up in a hospital, I guess I blazed-ya-right, ya pissed off cuz I would grant Tone visitation-rights, Im hearin shouts from the body cast, Sin! Let him in! I gotta see my asian-tonight!//
I really liked ya verse man it was also dope.
SINISTER : 4.45
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I have given it to I-BO because his had more heat and said everything in a pretty amazing way. Sin's verse was dope but because of the length of his bars I found myself loosin the flow of the verse often and becomin bored whilst readin, which was not a good thing. I-BO's verse was strong throughout and structure of the verse kept me entertained throughout. Both verses where amazing no doubt but I-BO's just judged it for me.
WINNER: I-BO
NewJack:
Maestro:
Sick verse. The flow on this was perfect, and you had pretty good multis and wordplay. The punches and personals were really nice too.
Sinister:
Also had a sick verse. It seemed to me like you were concentrating too much on wordplay and multis and not as much on the flow, personals, and punches. The wordplay and multis were both great, but it wasn't nearly as strong maestro in the other areas.
You both put up dope verses, but I felt Maestro's a lot more. Don't get me wrong Sin, you had some hard punches, but I think Maestro came harder, and his was on point in every aspect.
Close, but Maestro took this one.
You don't have to count mine if you don't want to, because I don't ever keystyle or anything, but without crew votes, it's gonna take AWHILE to get to 7.
|JEM|ILL|:
I-bo...Fav Part
~ Racing towards each over, Sin avoids "the-collision-course" - cuz even with an army, he couldnt stop my "de-molition-force"//
~ Bars way "above" his level when Maestros aiming "meta-forces" - killing Sin rawer than TX with deadly "meta-morphic"// *6
1st bar is just plain weak...no point just a filler to both parts...2nd bar is better but still not ill as it could be...
~ I'll "let-tha-loss-hit" like iron bricks, "dipped-in-venom" - even if he were Copperfield, he couldnt "trick-this-phenom"//
~ Only way he's "above" me is when "accepting-my-uppercut" - i could come half assed on this battle, still "affecting-this-fuckin-nut"//
All i got to say is that the first line is mega played. Speacially the Copperfield part...used by Whodini, Euro, Comon Sence, and maybe others...first part of the 2nd bar is played a little bit but a dope filler as it is... second line could have been made better...[/color]
I-Bo::: Come on man... Anyway this battle verse could have been so much better if you flipped some of the punches you had presently and just gave um the 1-2 sting... I practically gave up on the flow in the first part but the syllable s picked up and the flow got better leading up to the closing rhymes... Personals ehhh, weren't super great but they were there so that'll count as something in my mind. Some forced multies to the extreme you dont have to have multies in every line like that but if you do try workin with the rhyme scheme to pick the flow up and give it a more natural feeling. Wordplay was as I saaw very played on your part and needed much more consideration in the creativity department...
Sin...Fav Line
~End up in a hospital, I guess I blazed-ya-right, ya pissed off cuz I would grant Tone visitation-rights, Im hearin shouts from the body cast, Sin! Let him in! I gotta see my asian-tonight!//
Hmmmm...Some good some bad neh? Anyways 65% of ya verse was fillers...That really really needs to be cut down, sometimes you need to hurry up and get to the point nah mean? Flow was so stretched it was siccening BUT ya multies were hot i caught maybe one of them forced but it got back into place with the next line. Punches maybe 2 hott ones 2 mediocre and some weak bull shit, but the one that really counted and was good and hard hitting was a personal and a good one at that had me laughin for a good minute. Wordplay I saw one potentially but i almost seemed you where dissing your self in the process of trying to execute it. but not a bad verse.
Complexity: Ibo more consitent tho Sin had better multis...
Punchlines: Sinister...
Wordplay: Ibo Tho played it was executed better...
Personals: Sinister...
Hardest: Sinister...
Humour: Sinister...
4-2...
Ibo
Rating::: 2.23/5.0 [/b]
Sin
Rating::: 3.1/5.0[/b]
[size=8]VOTE : SINISTER[/size]----------
[EDITED BY MAESTRO]
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