verse ova maestro beat..

[da_notorious_mack]

sorry to maestro that i neither asked permission but i luved this beat...hope you aint mind...anyway could i get sum feed..it titled freestyle...


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/notoriousmack.htm

[ZILLA THA GOODFELLA]

it waz aight....seems u still aint dubbin it....just spittin it 1 time and not layerin it....tha mixing still needs major work.....but it waz aight, better than tha battle shit....keep at it....

[da_notorious_mack]

it waz aight....seems u still aint dubbin it....just spittin it 1 time and not layerin it....tha mixing still needs major work.....but it waz aight, better than tha battle shit....keep at it....

yeah i aint really understand all dat shit so i jus spit it in one take...somebody needta explain this shit to me...

[.:TimeLock:.]

u name it freestyle but don't seem like one seem kinda like read and low energy to me... not bad though hit me up later if u want some more advise

[Code Blue]

The lyrics ain't bad, but like other dudes said it wasn't put together right. Plus you don't really have ya own persona goin' for you. Sounds like you just readin' it straight off the page.