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check ma freestyle out!

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*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc:
okay, all good, i think so, too!
and thanx D !

uve all right!

but i couldnt understand yo mind, sinister!

thanx

...peace...

*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc:
I just grow in crux// and im proud of it, i aint a girl like the other kookz// all da fuckers sucked their dicks up and rooked // ...me! stuck in da same shit and hooked//... on da same spit., a lil bit hoot and everything's good// thats dumb man, read ma mind now like u do wid a book// then lead off and pick me up, take ma breath off, and oitch me up// BITCH ! No1 has ever stop to put me out but no1 understood that they pu me up!// im still alive cuz ive ever put me up in dis live // but u nevertheless strive me and strike to spite me , DONT LIKE ME!//
But i dont give a fuck u slutz, ive never clutch yo buttz, secretly wanna step yo nuttz// dont give a fuck if u take cutz or manage ma gunz , damn// though u yell im drop on da Ku-Klux-clan// fuck u! Fuck it, fuck u all for hate me more then i can// anyhow, u crow wid yo past// at last: lets quarrel who had da worst childhood!// thats sick and fucked up cuz i wanna never feel yo blood// u vanished and came back to me in da same bootz// fuck , boobz, u'll never change, da bodys on yo records r yo goodz// ive never feel such things like that, but other things, ma own thing// so i sing how i flee to ma see of thoughts and i brought ma fee to//
But u all bitchez have a hitch in da head and ditch me screamin:" SHIT ON U !"//
U dont think one moment about da hurtz i got// i broke up to spoke about da life , tod,// hope god bless u , cuz imma stress u , till u gas or fess , better do some cess cuz or ur gonna mess it up// thats what i want: ive kept it every hour every minute , every secund up// imma win it, every honor every spirit, cuz i know i'll never stop!// so i bowl u rollin down, u clown and keep ma crux in da palm// and keep up to ask ma god for trouble, as if in trouble is some calm!//

Now tell me how u'all feel this!?

*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc:
thats shitty, i think!
tell me what u think about it, what can i do better or what would flow tighter!

> PEACE<

·SiNiStEr·:
then try gettin some good writtens before you just go all out freestyle.. think about a topic and expand on it.. then everything else will come along..

soon you will incorporate multis and metaphors. is all good..

*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc:
haha...all good, thanx sinister!
was that freestyle below better than be4 or worse ?

peace

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