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Mourning The Missed - Indecisive
« on: February 22, 2004, 07:18:11 PM »

Im seeing the mistakes i made, to correct them now.
Im seeing how hard it is, to correct them how?
Im feeling the rejection that im anticipating for.
Im believing that you were just an angel i saw.

I met you and wanted the taste of the lust.
I felt the withdrawal for it soon to be a must.
I reminised the smell of your scent beveled.
I had faith and heaven and my world was leveled.
You entered as quick as you left? gone with no trace.
I look into my thoughts with the only image of your face.
Staring into space, my hearts pumping the pace.
I wasnt religous but for you i'd say grace.
You could be 'toxic' but i would want the infection.
I could be your patient, and allow you an inspection.
Im one of cupids arrows, firing at you 100% affection.
Your my general, i follow your orders like i'd stand to attenchun.

I didnt want things to turn out as they did.
I wanna come clean and be real, the lies i want rid.
Seemed like i messed up, dont everybody at times.
Im trying to express my sorrow to you thru my ryhmes.
Those eyes just glistened, and became my sun.
Your the rabbit, this a turtle race, you've already one.
Holla' back with an acceptance and friendship.
Coz its another close bond, i dont want to just let slip.


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Re:Mourning The Missed - Indecisive
« Reply #1 on: February 23, 2004, 07:16:35 AM »
thats pretty cool, i guess! ;)
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Re:Mourning The Missed - Indecisive
« Reply #2 on: February 23, 2004, 10:03:07 AM »
Thanx for the feedback win! appreciate it... thanx :p hows the ryhming coming along?
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Re:Mourning The Missed - Indecisive
« Reply #3 on: February 24, 2004, 10:57:34 AM »
great! ;D
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Re:Mourning The Missed - Indecisive
« Reply #4 on: February 27, 2004, 12:15:13 AM »
tight man, i like it very much.
i c u got alota potencial so keep workin
question: when did u start writing?
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Re:Mourning The Missed - Indecisive
« Reply #5 on: February 27, 2004, 01:23:26 AM »
yea, when?
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Re:Mourning The Missed - Indecisive
« Reply #6 on: February 27, 2004, 04:28:43 AM »
started writing about 5years ago.. thanx for the response to my feedback.
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Re:Mourning The Missed - Indecisive
« Reply #7 on: February 27, 2004, 08:15:33 AM »
dont matter!
5 years,....wow, thats cool!
man, i started writin about 1 year ago,...
where r you from? how old?
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