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« on: February 24, 2004, 05:07:52 PM »
...me myself and i, beyonce must of shared my dreams/
i dont feel for you anymore, what does this actually mean?/
coz it seems that im all outta love, none left to share/
but i have found a friendship in others, to me thats rare/
before i'd just stare, and wonder what drove your mind/
now im letting you go back to nature, no longer as mine/
bled tears to a ryhme, you think i've never cried before/
well im not gonna start here, wiped ducts clear, not anymore/
i'll walk through anydoor, aslong as its away from your homes/
coz i'll end up on the floor paying for my grief with you that i'd of shown/
stitched and sown, i've decided to call it aday like a pub owner/
time to move on, been here now migrating, glad to of known ya'/
i've shown ya, the best i can and how a real guy can treat you/
i'll just shake your hand as im on my way now, nice to meet you/

........ *walks out door* shuts past behind him...



 

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« Reply #1 on: February 26, 2004, 07:25:39 PM »
I feel ya that was deep
mad props indy
i wish i had your skill
 

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« Reply #2 on: February 27, 2004, 04:33:41 AM »
Thanx homie. appreciate it man. :) its just i cant deal with the shit all the time coz i gotta deal with more problems on top of hers.. aint working lol so i walked out...

Thanx again! :)

 

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« Reply #3 on: February 29, 2004, 11:53:19 AM »
Felt that man, v nice
 

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« Reply #4 on: February 29, 2004, 09:33:36 PM »
nice verse loc yell
ONE OF THE ILLEST EVER, 4EVER ROLL'N WITH C.I. NIGGA
 

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« Reply #5 on: March 01, 2004, 08:47:39 AM »
"Great mindz think alike"//
GF scared cuz she actually got sum1 to treat her RITE//
Now she wanna break up, not goin down with/o a FIGHT//
Thatz pure stupidity//
We were way to close n compadable, love PRODUCTIVITY//
No way she LEAVIN-ME, jus a 2 week break, but still pain is what she GIVEN-ME//
Maby this is my punishment for all the girlz i played//
Now when i TRULEY mean my game, my heart gets SLAYED//
Debt ta PAY, hopefully we last, break up on NO-DAY//
Your way to special, twisted my emotionz like a mother fuckin PRETZEL//
Frum telling me i am tha only 1 for U, "Letz be together for life", N u damn well KNEW//
How i felt about YOU, all the thingz i said were TRUE//
Wanna settle down, its way OVERDUE//
So please just stay ture to ur real feelingz//
Dont let real lov scare u, how close we seemed to b had me higher then a CEELING//
Dont know what to do now, so i am on my kneez KNEELING//
Prayin to god to save-us//
Seein what we had he GAVE-US//
N i think we still have it//
You jus need ta level ur thoughtz n see the TRUTH//
In heavenz book it sayz "4 life, Elease n' DUCE//
So when this 2 week period endz, please gimme good NEWZ//
I dont wanna become depressed over no female n' result to BOOZE//
BB King type BLUEZ, fuck all that i wanna b happy//
Thought i waz gonna b for tha first time since i lost my DADDY//
So WCC pary for me n my girl, Cuz i truley feel i ve found the one for me in this WORLD//

Yo thatz some real shit thats goin down in my life n thats how i feel. Like i ve played grls in tha past n told em i felt all these heavy feeling for em n i would never do nottin to hurt em or cheat on em, but i did. I didnt really give a fuk about thoze bitches cause i ve been twisted by females so many times it not funny. kinda like every1 else out there. but when i actually gain feeling for a girl and MEAN it, n i am thinkin theres no way in hell she would break up with me cuz all things weve been thru n all the feeling she supposdly has for me. Now she says that shez never had a man treat the way i do, i make her feel special. Shez never been in a relationship w/ a commited label on it. like were bf n gf type thing. SO i think shes scared n doesnt really know how to handle it so she tried to end it. I know u foolz dont really understand everything i said cuz thats just the simple just of it but i am sure u get my main point n whats goin down. but please pray for me, i dont wanna loose this grl n deep down she dont wanna loose me.....



Keepin it REAL



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« Reply #6 on: March 01, 2004, 08:51:22 AM »
My bad indy, jus got caught up in tha moment. Nice ass piece tho, i MOST deffinetly feel it. Makes me feel a little better when i see i am not the only one havin grl problemz, which i hate to hav n rarley have em. I hate putin myself thru that shit most of that time. Keep droppin tho Indy, u really advancin. N i really hope everything works out for u n ur grl if u want it to.


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« Reply #7 on: March 01, 2004, 01:37:49 PM »
ayo bro.. no worries you wrote what you felt you had to.. peace on that one man! and we split now and i did it and im so glad i did. made me realise how young i am and how other girls are missing.. i mean some girls believe she had something that they all wanted treat how she did.. so it made me realise they're are bigger fish in the sea, and im a fisherman!

thanx tinman. thanx for the props.. i hope to progress, coz i am in life!


peace homie, i felt you lyrics on your piece about real love scaring her and shit, i totally agree.. its just hard to accept or let go at times man!

peace tho props!