Author Topic: Hidden treasure  (Read 97 times)

Dreamz

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Hidden treasure
« on: February 29, 2004, 08:08:38 PM »
Love is a hidden treasure that needs to be found//
But I need the map and I'll be outward bound//
With the right map you will find the treasure of wealth//
But watch out for the haters that walk in stealth//
My world revoles around the one that I care for//
The boyz I hang with and girls I will always adore//
The girl in my life I thought I was her's but ...."SNAP''//
I lost her because one degree wrong was my map//
My heart is with the onez I have lost and hang with//
But the be with the one is it reality or just a myth//
Everyday I pray that she'll be mine I wish and wish//
But whatever happens happens and I know this //
But I care for her so much but she is not my treasure//
The love that I have for her no one can measure//
My map miss-lead me aiming for one but turned for another//
I know one day soon I will find the one true......My real other//
My treasure still hidden but thats okay for a little pleasure//
But I'm really still looking for my real "Hidden Treasure"//
 
 

Dreamz

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Re:Hidden treasure
« Reply #1 on: March 01, 2004, 02:05:11 PM »
I know it is smiple and plan but it is from the heart
so.......yeah.....peace
 

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Re:Hidden treasure
« Reply #2 on: March 01, 2004, 03:50:52 PM »
I felt that man. hella nice.. i know what your saying innit to.. you can lose a girl just like that.. like "snap" and you dont know what happened.. lol so props to ya man.. keep this up!


more feedback on this cat would be cool.. lol
 

Dreamz

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Re:Hidden treasure
« Reply #3 on: March 01, 2004, 06:19:57 PM »
yo thanks Indy