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In an instant, my eyes filled with tears...
Forgetting the thoughts that we've shared over the years...
Fears of a never ending heartache forever growing...
If i dared prayed to the lord, with my feelings showing...
Hoping to be relieved of the sentence apon which i've been given...
I wish for a new life, a new set of memories, let my old ones be ridden...
Sacrificed "love" for my "happyness" you'd think it meant the same...
But you forget who each other are, "love" blinds us, and on it we blame...
Everythings down to "love" weathered and the leaves of lust falling placid...
The tempations of giving into such a thing, melt on our conscience like acid...

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['Illicit']

im not quite catchin the subject but here's somethin I wrote while ago. aint got much to do wit it but its my kinda sacrifice.

it started young developed dreams I'd like to live/
every process of achievement went with all my might to give/
mic's 'n pens, always kept me stern throughout my growin pains/
hope remained of one day bein rich never to broke to pay/
my minds a cloak o shame not to mention all the dirt i did/
hurt inflict, wasnt born bad I just convert to it/
my mama tried her best to be that man in my fathers picture/
hollow figure, made me follow liquor swallow quicker/
everytime I thought about it had me feelin neglected/
I really expected growin up would have a gleeful intention/
but for me, fate always seems to be changin directions/
either its temporary or its jus a lasting affection/
fuck gittin mah hopes all I really want is to cope/
wit all the strain and the stress but all I got is the coke/
so much hate balled up inside me so I'm droppin them quotes/
but sometimes too many thoughts got me shot in the throat/
I cant jus lay away my brain and put on hold all my fears/
grief takes away the smiles and unfolds into tears/
the hardship, blood and sweat on a paper I spread/
a note to my dearest mother here's what it said.../

mom light up a candle, ya son ain't comin home tonight/
mourn me til u join me I lost my only hope in life/
its all gone suicide's my only choice in sight/
too many problems one solution and I know its right/


dont know if it totally suits your topic but I thought of sacrificing. even if its my own life lol

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Tight ass piece.. thanx 4 contributing man! respect!

[Dreamz]

Time with out a father is a lost to me//
Moms trying to raise me the only way she sees//
I'm glad I was blessed to have her in my life//
Many days and many problems mom helping with my strife//
She help me from days of rest to days of death//
I will hate my father for what he did until my dying breath//
He is a pussy for leaving my mom alone and sad so I step up//
I'll care for my sick mom feeding her soup from the cup//
I'm grew up to be A man by my self and it took a lot away//
I lost time hanging with friends at the end of my school dayz//
Had to look up to my mom cause she's a single parent//
She the only one thats knows I am transparent//
To my father I hope you rest in pieces you damn freak//
Cause with out you I grew up to be strong not weak//
I'm a man with out your help and i'm proud your gone//
Because honestly all I need is my powerful mom//


really it's not any sacrifices but  I think you guys will get the whole ideal.....

[maximus]

Its destruction time, gotta choose between breakin probation or the production line...
in such a time i gotta give up my life for a 'bright idea' but i still sayin fuck tha shine...
Luckz a dime, money comes n goes but i gotta throw away my heart jst to touch her mind...
it sucks ive been dumb, now ive lost my wayz from labour n my handz is rough from greese shun...
i feel like pullin sum fuckin treason, i feel like a fkn dirty dog can u please cut the lead son?...
The stress of the world, makes me do wat i do not coz i choose but jst 2 be impressen da girl...
my stomaches stretchin to hurl, but i just pass wind now watz gonna come up next in the whirl...
The money aint enough to support her needs, everytime i fuck up my lawyer gives me torts to read...
shes caugth in greed, but still i give up my life to put dinner on her plate i ought to feel...
Some kinda satisfaction, this job got my body sould n my minds snapped in fractions...
Get hurt at work n just survey the welt, i gotta make my girl happy but get arrested n have to pay for help...
Shoud i say shit or stay n melt, the kitchens hot i sacrificed my freedom 4 my baby girl wit a conveyer belt...

labour intensive work force is a bitch

['Illicit']

damn dreamz shit was dope, I really felt that one.  very similar situation on my side so therefore...

[Dreamz]

yo thanks
i did not realize we have
he same problems untill i read your
your was off the hook too
ceeride props to you