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Skillz V. Kickz Deluxe
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SkillZ
Muthafuckin' OG
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SkillZ
Skillz V. Kickz Deluxe
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March 14, 2004, 05:40:14 PM »
10-15 bars
First wit 3 votes
I'll drop first
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*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc
Muthafuckin' Don!
Posts: 864
Karma: 470
"u gotta give respect to get respect"
Re:Skillz V. Kickz Deluxe
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Reply #1 on:
March 15, 2004, 05:02:56 AM »
cool, i wanna see, whats then about!
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"I grew up on the chill-side, the no-big-deal-side, staying alive was no problem"
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SkillZ
Muthafuckin' OG
Posts: 258
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SkillZ
Re:Skillz V. Kickz Deluxe
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Reply #2 on:
March 17, 2004, 12:41:24 AM »
Bitch, I deliver
breaks
like the
kickz-commercials
sick-wit-personals,
like a appetizer
but dont
chase fruit like prision dicks-in-urinals
/
But since this bitch-learnin-we'll stick
coal in ya puss
, let the
chick-burn-untill
she thick-firm-n-still then
eat
her off my dick,
earned-the-
meal
!//
Now what about ya shits-deluxe
eat ya like tricks-n-lucks
I'ma
cereal killer!
n u n
gums
go 2gether like hicks-n-trucks jus a "
hint-you-suck
"/
You
hang wit me
? maybe
lynched-you
-fuck, First hit-you-struck now move'n in our battle less then likely... barly a inch-you-stuck//
Post first n still
split ya verse half
like
kit-kat-bars
, chewn... spit-back-charred now your welcome to step if you get-that-far!/
Cuz with these
weights I'm pumpin
doubt you could
lift-that-bar
Try, push ya pits-back,
-arms, loose
like ya
lips thats lisp-n-part
//
Only six bars yur welcome to do the same
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SkillZ
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SkillZ
Re:Skillz V. Kickz Deluxe
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Reply #3 on:
March 17, 2004, 12:55:52 AM »
Havnt battled in awhile not my best....
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*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc
Muthafuckin' Don!
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Karma: 470
"u gotta give respect to get respect"
Re:Skillz V. Kickz Deluxe
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Reply #4 on:
March 17, 2004, 04:30:32 AM »
in some points i didnt understand what u talked bout
i should read it once again, ill tell u what i feel cool sooner!
but it aint bad, lets
have a look what deluxe will spit back!
peace
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[J-Live]
SkillZ
Muthafuckin' OG
Posts: 258
Karma: 2
SkillZ
Re:Skillz V. Kickz Deluxe
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Reply #5 on:
March 17, 2004, 03:17:05 PM »
i wouldnt expect you to get it lol, dont hurt yourself thinkin
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Dreamz
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Re:Skillz V. Kickz Deluxe
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Reply #6 on:
March 17, 2004, 06:20:37 PM »
where is kick's verse?
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*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc
Muthafuckin' Don!
Posts: 864
Karma: 470
"u gotta give respect to get respect"
Re:Skillz V. Kickz Deluxe
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Reply #7 on:
March 18, 2004, 06:06:00 AM »
dont matter, i got now! :-*
;D ;D ;D
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"I grew up on the chill-side, the no-big-deal-side, staying alive was no problem"
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kickz_deluxe
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Wurzeln&Flügel
Re:Skillz V. Kickz Deluxe
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Reply #8 on:
March 18, 2004, 06:39:55 AM »
first to dreamz: i neither got tha time bein all time in the internet nor tha money...
whutever, @skillz: dont know wether ill drop only six bars, gotta look if im in tha mood writin more...well see
ok, my part:
Kickz up feedin this fidget with his cereal-snot needin less than one "skillz"-rinsin tingin this bitchez material-rot from cerulean-to-crimson/
this foulmouthed fuck "skillin" got no protection of ma wordz wichz a "killin" linkin liquefaction of hoopincough-az-sprinklin/
dude, im golden, u just tha mute bronxcheer of a bronzbit outstripped after chemitypy/ (1)
yo shitz frontispiece kicked to tha curb , u wanna be in tha front line but flipping boring az spittin scorin a "front wheel drive", lil hisadidee/
but now letz do a grammatical phrase: yo winz POSSIBLE but MORE PROBALE`Z a medical certificate for plain-failz/
yo stuffz that miserable even with a doubl-platinum-stiker on it u couldnt sell enough to pay a night with two chained-baitz/
anyhow, it was rattlin-sick hearin a rappin-convict dude blurtin out hez an anthropoid-ape/
dont b unsettlin tha p servitude, vert yo verve back n gird up yo loinz-to-"yourlikez"-state/
damn, even your concentration -faint layz siege to ma nervez/
admirin your selfadmiration your paint advertz yo artz, indecisivez written on tha blurtz/ (2)
^^just one thing in the end^^
wait, this lil parrot wanted to join tha commercialz n lorez -of -kix/
such an arse outta tha arsenil az u are nooned miss, twigs, hez tha congenial of all vermiform-appendix/
(1)chemitypy: a process which etchz metals
(2)i read a few of skillz old battlez n saw he lost againt indy; finally itz a stupid line cuz tha more u write tha better u get, but just wanted to diminish his ego alil bit..mayb it worked
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kickz_deluxe
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Wurzeln&Flügel
Re:Skillz V. Kickz Deluxe
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Reply #9 on:
March 19, 2004, 12:01:57 PM »
VOTEZ PLZ
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even a long way gon end once
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I see no changes, all I see is racist faces
misplaced hate makes disgrace to races
~~~~~~~~~~°~~~~~~~~~~
YA CAN'T STOP THA WAVES BUT LEARN TO SURF
~~~~~~~~~~°~~~~~~~~~~
C R U X
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*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc
Muthafuckin' Don!
Posts: 864
Karma: 470
"u gotta give respect to get respect"
Re:Skillz V. Kickz Deluxe
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Reply #10 on:
March 20, 2004, 12:27:26 AM »
where r da votez?
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Kill
Muthafuckin' Don!
Posts: 5859
Karma: 254
Re:Skillz V. Kickz Deluxe
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Reply #11 on:
March 20, 2004, 07:11:07 AM »
ok, i haven't read it, if you want me to vote i will and give u a reason but if u think i'm too biased i won't waste my time on this...
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Last Edit: March 20, 2004, 07:12:01 AM by Kill
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kickz_deluxe
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Wurzeln&Flügel
Re:Skillz V. Kickz Deluxe
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Reply #12 on:
March 20, 2004, 07:50:14 AM »
damn, didnt i say itz over? i dont think ur biased n even if i m sure u wont show it with teasin me or such shit, ya know?
finally we aint kids, are we?
so please give your vote n believe me, i wont say u was biased.
...
peace
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even a long way gon end once
---------------*----------------
I see no changes, all I see is racist faces
misplaced hate makes disgrace to races
~~~~~~~~~~°~~~~~~~~~~
YA CAN'T STOP THA WAVES BUT LEARN TO SURF
~~~~~~~~~~°~~~~~~~~~~
C R U X
==========
*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc
Muthafuckin' Don!
Posts: 864
Karma: 470
"u gotta give respect to get respect"
Re:Skillz V. Kickz Deluxe
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Reply #13 on:
March 20, 2004, 08:42:36 AM »
funny conversationz right here
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"I grew up on the chill-side, the no-big-deal-side, staying alive was no problem"
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Kill
Muthafuckin' Don!
Posts: 5859
Karma: 254
Re:Skillz V. Kickz Deluxe
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Reply #14 on:
March 20, 2004, 11:12:59 AM »
Ok Skillz, urs wasn't bad, nice to have u back here spittin, most of your multies worked, flow was ok. Some of ur punches were pretty good which makes sum of the other lines look a bit less well thought-out, but overall u hit a couple times and I liked ur shit
Kickz, last time my vote went to u but ur verse had the same weaknesses this one had and this time it was even a bit worse: I could not flow most of that shit and the multies often didn't really work. Also you use big ass words sumtimes but make no or little sense ("admirin his self-admiration" eg, or callin him a "anthropoid ape", that might be a dictionnary word, but the diss itself is lame). Rather keep ur words simple and hit with good multies (look at Mack's verses for example). I think you got potential but u need to work on sum technical aspects of writin...just sum advice
VOTE = SKILLZ
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