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Thinklove
Lil Geezy
Posts: 15
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March 22, 2004, 01:17:56 PM »
This is my first keystyle on this page I just wanna know what ya think about my lines.....keep in mind that I'm from Sweden english is just my second language!
I focus on odiuos opponents, Who rhyme components seem bogus//
Conjure up magic scrolls that hex this trolls whit hocus pocus//
Your getting green like the mask thanks to all that herbal//
I sent you to sky your getting high thanks to all my verbal//
Combine "You is good" whit a movie and that would be "Liar Liar"//
Cos you lyrics wouldn´t even be close to hot if ya put em on fire//
Your that sell out ya got to be fucking "promo sexual"//
Homo sexual?, to you even the best treatment is ineffectual-
073 964 75 44, now ya can give the metaphorical oracle a call//
I´ll make ya crawl around my feets after this story that´s allegorical//
I´ll sneak in to your seremonial chaple, have my self a litte grappel//
steal someof your booze take a snapple and then slash your adams apple//
Stuck in a fucking handicap match I´ll remov my fingertips//
I´m still a thigter writer the Epox bitch still virgin pussy lips//
You stepp to this thinking everything is so goddamn peachy//
But in this fucking battle I am like the Romans, "Veni, Vidi, Vici"//
kisses and hugs/TK
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da_notorious_mack
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March 22, 2004, 01:24:49 PM »
damn sight betta than most the new blood...stick around blud....
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Thinklove
Lil Geezy
Posts: 15
Karma: -1
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Reply #2 on:
March 22, 2004, 01:28:58 PM »
thanks man....
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Inspectah
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March 22, 2004, 02:33:26 PM »
Word.. concrete dawg!
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Dreamz
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March 22, 2004, 09:00:22 PM »
very good keep it up
Peace
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'Illicit'
Muthafuckin' Don!
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i rarely smoke... but i love mickey d's
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March 22, 2004, 11:44:53 PM »
shit, you used more vocab than i do most of the time so ur english is right there dawg. nice piece
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I once walked into a brothel with a honeycomb and a jackass...
"Perhaps the most valuable result of all education is the ability to make yourself do the thing you have to do, when it ought to be done, whether you like it or not."
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Thinklove
Lil Geezy
Posts: 15
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March 23, 2004, 07:23:56 AM »
Thanks for all the good comments, HOw do you do if ya wanna drop against someone in the keystyle battle forum,?
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kickz_deluxe
'G'
Posts: 172
Karma: 0
Wurzeln&Flügel
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March 23, 2004, 08:10:18 AM »
yeah, props, really tight. when did u start writing?
just would be interested in.
keep working
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even a long way gon end once
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I see no changes, all I see is racist faces
misplaced hate makes disgrace to races
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YA CAN'T STOP THA WAVES BUT LEARN TO SURF
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'Illicit'
Muthafuckin' Don!
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i rarely smoke... but i love mickey d's
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March 23, 2004, 08:15:57 AM »
go into Key Style,and call the desired person out, or accept/decline his or hers challenge. then go into Key Style Battleboard to battle em.
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I once walked into a brothel with a honeycomb and a jackass...
"Perhaps the most valuable result of all education is the ability to make yourself do the thing you have to do, when it ought to be done, whether you like it or not."
WCC Hall Of Famer
Thinklove
Lil Geezy
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March 23, 2004, 08:35:20 AM »
I've just been writing for about 4 month's on swedish and about 2 months on english. I'll try to keep up and be better
pusspuss whit meens kisses on Swedish haha
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Thinklove
Lil Geezy
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March 23, 2004, 08:35:55 AM »
I've just been writing for about 4 month's on swedish and about 2 months on english. I'll try to keep up and be better
pusspuss witch meens kisses on Swedish haha
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kickz_deluxe
'G'
Posts: 172
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Wurzeln&Flügel
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March 23, 2004, 08:54:25 AM »
wow, just 2 months? then ur very talented!
pusspuss..u remember me on one of ma friends
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even a long way gon end once
---------------*----------------
I see no changes, all I see is racist faces
misplaced hate makes disgrace to races
~~~~~~~~~~°~~~~~~~~~~
YA CAN'T STOP THA WAVES BUT LEARN TO SURF
~~~~~~~~~~°~~~~~~~~~~
C R U X
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