BATTLE RAP...2 new Keystyles.

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

Rhyme 1:

I'm comin' back for those who said I can't rap//
And I'm runnin' this show, I'll pretend it's track laps//
And that's that, I slap back//
My inc will murder you like an ax and a masked man//
Like pac-man, I eat you fruits and gain power//
Get beat to death, I eat the flesh in the same hour//
A planes faster, so I drop bombs on soft kids//
But just like Pearl Harbor I bomb you twice, aw shit//
1941 and 2K1 in the box office//
Bringin that rad-ish, quit being so bitter//
Overtaken by this tyrant, Mussolini or Hitler//
I would finish you off, but I'll save the embarrassment//
Cuz your existance's sad, like the same sex marraiges...


Rhyme 2:

Ambigious rhymes containing contortions//
Your flesh consumes your soul like a baby abortion//
I'm saving the corpses, but to eat I'm reluctant//
I only eat MC's on the mic, when I'm bustin'//
This ain't nerd rap, it's a prototype//
You can't comprehend my brilliance like a foreign guide//
Talk shit, and I'll pop up, like a porno site//
Strangle you with the chord of my 4 inch mic//
Clandestine messages, some subliminal//
But I don't rap in Hebrew, I'm a din that's irresistible//
A criminal, But I haven't killed any lesbos//
I impregnate them, and send their ass to Fresno...

[·SiNiStEr·]

is there a purpose in that.. if u wanna battle i'll battle ya..

[TiNmaN]

Dope ass shit rite there doggy. Ya need to drop more for realla

[LP]

Decent drop,

You need too structure ya bars more imo.  Your punches are kind of weak too.  You should focus on creativiity.  Try and add Metas/Similes/Wordplay.  Try not too add so many fillers too, cuz thats what ya verse mainly was;rhyming words..

"I would finish you off, but I'll save the embarrassment//
Cuz your existance's sad, like the same sex marraiges..."

^^fav bar

Keep droppin
Pz~

[Primo]

i'll battle ya.

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

LMAO...This is not a real battle verse...Just some shit I keyed real quick cuz I was bored, so posted it up here...If I wanted to battle, I'd take time to write my shit...PeACe

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

Here's another one:

Sccit Tha Shit is a blessing, even though he's an accident//
You feel me like a virgin getting raped by an African//
You see me? I'm a person, and a Hip-Hop activist//
I'm pissed off ("this kid's soft"), Sccit's not having it//
I'm harder than a dick inside of Carmen Electra//
I leave you drippin' red, and I'm not talkin' about ketchup//
I don't give a shit, you can't see me like Stevie//
You're a weenie, cannot be me, but you feel me like a beating...//
I'm cold like a freezer that came from the North Pole//
I'm bold like this font, I love to smoke bowls//
I no longer make sense, cuz my fuckin' head's full//
And I'm higher than a bird drinking Red Bull//


It's not serious, just some 2 minute keystyles...I haven't written for quite a while, so I figured I'd start simple like this...PeACe

[bez]

Thought the first 2 where nice mate, you obviously spent more time on em that the last drop.

It was still cool but quite simple and not as good as the first 2.  Keep spittin tho man.

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

Well, I lost my book of rhymes, and I haven't written serious since then...I had deep/meaningful rhymes, battle rhymes, story-telling rhymes, nerd-rap style rhymes, comedy rhymes, etc...I lost that shit, and I haven't been into rapping ever since...Of course I'll get back into it in the future, because that's what I want my profession to be...PeACe

[bez]

Well, I lost my book of rhymes, and I haven't written serious since then...I had deep/meaningful rhymes, battle rhymes, story-telling rhymes, nerd-rap style rhymes, comedy rhymes, etc...I lost that shit, and I haven't been into rapping ever since...Of course I'll get back into it in the future, because that's what I want my profession to be...PeACe

A loser?  You seem pretty good at loosing things so you'll be good at that.

lol

You'll get it all back man and you'll prob find your rhyme book in a few months or years and you'll be amazed at what you wrote and shit.