Author Topic: Short n Sweet  (Read 295 times)

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Short n Sweet
« on: May 12, 2004, 04:23:48 PM »
I'm vola-tile, ave u gotta-while? i wont stop til i've gotcha-wild.
A troublesome kid dont stop-this-child, as i flop-shit-wild.
soak-n-soil, getting hot as i toast-n-boil, i cook up emcees like a roast-in-foil, i dont boast-or-toil, i flip-and-fill, get the cards but im not sick-but-ill.
just sip-dont-spill, devils-cup saw throat gotta strepsil-stuck, burnt-ya-taste.
i'll put a price on your head, so u gotta earn-your-face...

something short.. just to holla at ya with.. check.

Indy
 

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Re:Short n Sweet
« Reply #1 on: May 12, 2004, 04:40:26 PM »
felt it man, nice flow and sum cool multies, good to see ya back.
 

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Re:Short n Sweet
« Reply #2 on: May 12, 2004, 10:59:27 PM »
lol..
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Re:Short n Sweet
« Reply #3 on: May 13, 2004, 09:18:55 AM »
lol..
dont hate it was a nice little piece.
 

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Re:Short n Sweet
« Reply #4 on: May 13, 2004, 12:06:35 PM »
felt it man, nice flow and sum cool multies, good to see ya back.
fo sure...
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Re:Short n Sweet
« Reply #5 on: May 13, 2004, 04:05:23 PM »
not too bad man
 

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Re:Short n Sweet
« Reply #6 on: May 14, 2004, 09:50:54 AM »
lol..
dont hate it was a nice little piece.

i guess it was a nice little piece but damn overall it sucked, i think multis are a lil too much for indy to handle.. i mean the shit dont make sense..

peep.. opens with
I'm vola-tile, ave u gotta-while?

seriously, what the fuck is that.. if you were volatile then it should end quick, and who really asks random questions like that in the middle of a verse..

A troublesome kid dont stop-this-child, as i flop-shit-wild.

hes tellin you not to stop this child, why are you callin yourself a child, your settin yaself up to get insulted..

next bar wasnt that bad but the flow kinda got weirdly switched at the end.. and all the i soak-and-soil.. you soak and soil? what the fuck, you got a bladder problem or somethin? just some of 'em dont make sense nah mean..

just sip-dont-spill, devils-cup saw throat gotta strepsil-stuck, burnt-ya-taste.

dunno what the fuck a strepsil is..

i'll put a price on your head, so u gotta earn-your-face...
name a situation where i would have to earn my face, there is none that is moronic..

but wuteva.. i dont mean to be mean but i think its better if indy knows why he aint gettin any props from anyone outside the UK..



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Re:Short n Sweet
« Reply #7 on: May 14, 2004, 10:07:57 AM »
hey..im from the uk an i gave no props...dont brand all uk rappers garbage..
 

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Re:Short n Sweet
« Reply #8 on: May 14, 2004, 01:57:10 PM »
hey..im from the uk an i gave no props...dont brand all uk rappers garbage..

aight..
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Battle Record :    24-6

thats how we do..
.:-ELITE-:.    M-Dogg.. Rodzilla.. SiNiStEr.. VitoDeLuca.. Mack..  .:-ELITE-:. she wanted me to bust in her eye so she could watch my children..Fabolous
 

Inspectah

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Re:Short n Sweet
« Reply #9 on: May 16, 2004, 02:28:55 PM »
ludacris got lyrics that dont exactly make sense, nor has twista.. if it ryhmes well, and u get a jist of what its about.. just prop it.. dont go to town like u gotta be better.. god damn. arent u ever a lil easy on people? or is it something affectingu  as a child to be so forward.. and yea i dont like it. so i'd prefer u stay out my posts, unlesss u bringing people in to diss ur comments, i just want feedback on my ryhme, not what other people think of urs.. so dont give excess un-nessecary shit.. aite...

I can handle multis..
 

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Re:Short n Sweet
« Reply #10 on: May 16, 2004, 08:51:20 PM »
I can handle multis..

im just askin you to prove it..
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Battle Record :    24-6

thats how we do..
.:-ELITE-:.    M-Dogg.. Rodzilla.. SiNiStEr.. VitoDeLuca.. Mack..  .:-ELITE-:. she wanted me to bust in her eye so she could watch my children..Fabolous
 

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Re:Short n Sweet
« Reply #11 on: May 16, 2004, 10:09:37 PM »
I can handle multis..

im just askin you to prove it..

...and he answered
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Re:Short n Sweet
« Reply #12 on: May 17, 2004, 06:22:23 AM »
 ;D
even a long way gon end once
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I see no changes, all I see is racist faces
misplaced hate makes disgrace to races
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YA CAN'T STOP THA WAVES BUT LEARN TO SURF
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Re:Short n Sweet
« Reply #13 on: May 17, 2004, 10:57:09 AM »
I can handle multis..

im just askin you to prove it..

...and he answered

if thats what he has to show then he hasnt proven shit..
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thats how we do..
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Re:Short n Sweet
« Reply #14 on: May 17, 2004, 11:22:33 AM »
I can handle multis..

im just askin you to prove it..

...and he answered

if thats what he has to show then he hasnt proven shit..
yer, thats yo oppinion ::)
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