NEW SPIT, NEW SPIT!

[bez]

Now I aint never blamed nobody for my past mistakes,
I'm a man I gotta life by the choices I make,
Whether I degrated myself in the process, I make my opinions know,
Even if they have the sickening impact such as the planes they flown,
My blood stains ain't gone, they ever present in my skin,
Been treated rough over the years so ya know its wearin thin,
But I gotta try to keep liven, I gotta keep beatin away the stress,
Gotta hold my head high so I will make it through this mess,
I feel blessed, but I gotta know my backs being watched,
Feel like my life's slowly being soaked wit a red blood cross,
Hope, I'm now filled with lots, but hope can often fail a man,
I'f your lifes on the right track it can derail the plan,
Tell me with ya hail the man, who makes it all on his own,
Or will you be jealous of his desire to sit in the throne,
And so you throw stones, but they will bounce back off me,
I would of made it in rap but you hate that I'm not black like coffee,
So you try to stop me, but I'm too vicious to be touched,
To sickalicious to be matched, to butch to be fucked, wit,
So what gives now you ain't strong even to stop this?,
Bez quick to shoot ya ass up like Nas and then drop ya at a hospice.

[·SiNiStEr·]

I wasnt really feelin that one.. your flow is on but the content is just boring and it gets repetitive, i mean you could spit that on audio and it would stay on the beat but no one would want to listen.
and if your life sucks to where it goes to the extent that you describe, maybe you should change somethin.. just a lil opinion..

[bez]

Thanks Sin, nice advice.

[·SiNiStEr·]

Thanks Sin, nice advice.

for you.. anytime

[bez]

That sounded gay. lol