Author Topic: It's over (Read 407 times)

Dreamz · « **on:** June 04, 2004, 10:05:14 PM »

June 25th Is That Day When We Walk Across The Stage//
We End One Chapter Just To Start A New Page//
We Spent The Last 13 Years, But Have We Come To An Age//
Where All We Can Do Is Express Our Undyeing Rage//
Will We Rember All The People That We Called Friends?//
The Microsopic Bonds That Hold Us Together Will They End?//
Can We See Thing Better With A Telephoto Lens?//
I'm Sorry So With These Words I Hope To Bring Some Amends//
The Year Is Over And Graduation Is Coming So For NoW It's Over//

kickz_deluxe · « **Reply #1 on:** June 05, 2004, 02:25:39 AM »

keep it up man, nice story -n i see u improved pretty much...

keep practisin

*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc · « **Reply #2 on:** June 05, 2004, 05:45:22 AM »

Quote from: kickz_deluxe on June 05, 2004, 02:25:39 AM

keep it up man, nice story -n i see u improved pretty much...

keep practisin

word

Dreamz · « **Reply #3 on:** June 05, 2004, 07:53:03 PM »

thanks

bez · « **Reply #4 on:** June 05, 2004, 08:17:04 PM »

yer nice man, improved!

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