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Whats Sadnizz?
« on: June 06, 2004, 03:51:17 AM »
Sadnizz iz to know that they mourn when you born//
why cant sum parentz accept their own bred corn?//
Rich peeps or poor pees dont care how we grow//
i saw a torn form come out of a bad storm//
this kid is the son of a porn, cant walk, is ever prone//
cuz these "sage" grown-upz used a worn-up condom//
kid's eyez will neva see anything like his parentz dont see his fate//
his ears wont hear anything like his parents dont hear his hate//
they wanna throw dice, cant devise his handicaped condition//
and cant imagine how theyll have to fight for his position//
they look in his eyez and try to use their whole vision//
and they see in his eyez da reflection of their decision!//
 

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Re:Whats Sadnizz?
« Reply #1 on: June 06, 2004, 04:03:59 AM »
wow...........gurl, u fuckin improved!!!  :o
i havent been readin a piece written ba u for a long time, n i see u improved a lot....

keep writin girl !!!


 

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Re:Whats Sadnizz?
« Reply #2 on: June 06, 2004, 04:32:45 AM »
thank you
 

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Re:Whats Sadnizz?
« Reply #3 on: June 06, 2004, 10:53:54 AM »
niccccccce, really liked that.
 

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Re:Whats Sadnizz?
« Reply #4 on: June 06, 2004, 02:57:58 PM »
sum better lines, sum more stereotypical ones, overall i gotta say uve improved tho
 

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Re:Whats Sadnizz?
« Reply #5 on: June 07, 2004, 01:54:40 AM »

thanx a lot! :)
« Last Edit: June 11, 2004, 07:54:16 AM by Zet »
 

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Re: Whats Sadnizz?
« Reply #6 on: July 03, 2004, 09:54:04 AM »
yeh sure did. weiter so.
 

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Re: Whats Sadnizz?
« Reply #7 on: July 03, 2004, 12:22:01 PM »
mann, dankeschön...ich werds versuchen...! ;)