Author Topic: another quick drop.  (Read 111 times)

bez

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another quick drop.
« on: June 09, 2004, 11:50:56 AM »
I'm gunna drop so fresh shit that ya'll can hip-hop-wit,
I'm hip hop through and through so you know this rips-hot-shit,
And I drip-drop-spits thats are to fast-to-fuck-with,
I use my lyrics to fight so I'm always last-to-fuck-with,
Use ma words to blast-through-punks-shit, with the force of a tyson-punch,
Rip ya ear into shreds like the force of tysons-munch, haha,
This is just another quick pen, five-minutes-to-write,
I tried to think of a charachter, twenty five-gimmicks-a-night,
But I just gotta be me, be myself, do my own shit for me,
Yet I find myself reachin for things my parents want me to be,
Wanna try to make it in this life, be famous-and-not-shameless,
The worlds in rages, peeps make it without being courageous-and-no-pages,
Can hold any amount of words that explain the real life-they-live,
They ain't blameless in this shit, thats why they got no write-to-give,
Every page would be the same, I stepped on so many peeps-to-get-here,
Well I wanna make it by being opposite, wanna sleep-without-fear,
Ain't prepared to be a sheep and follow on with the trend,
That the more people you fuck over the money you'll have to spend,
Shit just ain't me, shits crazy, I'll make it on my own-two,
I'm getting a grip of life now, you should too, before life disown's-you,
 

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Re:another quick drop.
« Reply #1 on: June 10, 2004, 09:31:20 AM »
THATS REALLY GOOD, BUT IT COULD BE HOTTER!
 

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Re:another quick drop.
« Reply #2 on: June 10, 2004, 06:48:47 PM »
that was clean no doubt im gettin used to seeing ill shit from u
ayo...
 

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Re:another quick drop.
« Reply #3 on: June 11, 2004, 08:09:50 AM »
i dont know, it was lyrically okay, but i dont feel this topic, mayb i couldnt understand everything you wanted to tell us wid that piece but i saw better shit written by BEZ,... but i know you r realy good in writin and shit, and i think, it was also good for practice... doesnt all care, dude, keep it up!

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