Rage

[supermanstick]

First post, I'm new to the rap game-just gettin some feed back- just a freestyle

I'm here to turn heads on these false philosophies-
Intrigue minds, dissect brains, to implant ideology-
Follow theology, but persecuted for my beliefs because-
I yelled increase the peace, but this fuckin cop was a Nazi-
With Italian influence my hood learned to 'kill for fun'-
Banged 'Easside LB' on the Easside of Carson -
With lab manuals that'll startle physics fanatics -
with antics that'll make you kill yourself in the attic, God dammit-
I panic because i feel the footsteps of Meggido-
To finally bring peace to all my peeps in the ghetto-
Ill one day settle, reparations once in for all,
by lettin these democrats taste the silver tip of the barrel-
They continue to give us false hope, so we continue to settle-
We continue to bitch, and continue to be stuck in this shithole-
Even the Rev. Jackson had to go get him a crack hoe,
And Bill Cosby actin like we all got the situation from his show-
So for all my niggaz that feel like your confined in this cage-
Drop the guns and use your words to release your rage-

[10dency]

i liked that shit alot good job

[*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc]

i think for yo first time its realy cool written