New Verse to "Backup Ho"

[Eddie G.]

This is the first time I've ever written lyrics, so please be nice   It's meant to go over the song "Backup Ho" aka "Breakfast In My Bed" by Goldie Loc and Snoop Dogg [produced by Battlecat].  I got the instrumental for it and I included it for you guys to see how it works out.  Start it at the 37 second mark and flow with it.
Here's the link to the instrumental:
http://s11.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=6717EA4D15569703FDB8BB800B05C871

Here's the verse:
Droppin on that ass it’s about that time
To get up in the Escalade and scoop some dimes
Call up the homie now he’s on his way
We bout to cruise the street for a booty payday
Bumpin Battlecat as we roll the block
Pull over to the side when I see that booty pop
Hoes come to me like a natural thang
I skip out the ride like boogie-bang-bang
You know I stack these chips, you know I’m on that grind
So that’s why you wanna come to the spot tonite
Throw you out the truck, in my bed we go
You ridin this shit like Dosie-Do
Bustin all over on your hands and face
Now that I’m done you can leave this place
When it’s all said and done we had a good time
I’ll just make sure to keep you on the backup line

Drop feedback, peace

[Eddie G.]

Y'all are sleeping on this genius verse

[GoodLuvn169]

It's aite.  A little sing-song though.