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bez
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Quick rhyme...career!
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September 04, 2004, 04:16:00 PM »
I control my own destiny, I've scripted my time,
One day you'll see the best of me, directions sublime,
Action! will see the reaction of actin, peeps recitin my lines,
Oscar dedications to my parents, standin right at my side,
Written, directed and produced by this average boy wit big dreams,
Written sickly, directed uniquely...got peeps jumpin from seats,
Audience can't get enough...label me the new Steven,
Makin me blush but I ain't into name stealin...this is Bez era get believin,
Creatin reel after reel of film thats dope,
Is there a number 2 coming out? you'll just have to hope,
Movie world will feel my impact, got the heart of a lion,
First film a flop, so!, you know I'm gunna keep tryin,
Tell me what I can and can't do, you'll feel a fist of iron,
I am the next big man and I will leave you cryin if you say I'm lyin,
Won't stop till I reach the top...this rhymes my witness,
Makin classics that are hot, my name idolised in the credit sequence!
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Timmeeeehh
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Bloaw.
Re: Quick rhyme...career!
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September 05, 2004, 03:13:33 AM »
Seems tight.. But I don't have the right flow for it, I can't give it any flow, curious how you would rap that text ..
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Jimmy Cash2120
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Re: Quick rhyme...career!
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September 07, 2004, 10:06:31 AM »
it was dope
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Code Blue
Muthafuckin' Don!
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Re: Quick rhyme...career!
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September 08, 2004, 10:18:45 PM »
Dope...period.
Good to see you got ya sights set on suntin' else career-wise rather than dreaming of bein' Pac or Big like some of these other dudes.
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Suffice
Muthafuckin' Don!
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Ain't no motherfuckin' llama!
Re: Quick rhyme...career!
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September 09, 2004, 05:19:51 AM »
wow dude, your rhyme structures are freakin superb. Awesome shit with a positive meaning
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