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Now_Im_Not_Banned

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Untitled, But What Can I Say...
« on: October 07, 2004, 10:39:01 PM »
I feel pressure on my shoulder & tension in my muscles
A moor of thoughts, festooned with all my struggles
My troubles, a puddle of mud, life under rubble
Everything's extemporaneous, I lose my breath when I hustle
As tears drip, I’m fearless, appearance…
is the covering to my soul, I'd rather be jumping off a sheer cliff
Insufferable noise is the soundtrack to my existence
But I mask that with music, because the outside world's resistance
So imperceptible it's incredible, it pulls me back to reality
I'm not aware if it’s just me, inclination is abnormality
Bells ring loudly awaken my mental hell
I see devils with halos, hearing their gentle yells
Soul can't escape, even though it's suffering
But maybe I'm just a coward who needs some toughening
 

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Re: Untitled, But What Can I Say...
« Reply #1 on: October 09, 2004, 06:33:34 AM »
Loved that mate.  Thought that was dope.
 

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Re: Untitled, But What Can I Say...
« Reply #2 on: October 10, 2004, 06:54:51 AM »
afraid of grundy?


no on the real, that was actually quite dope, didn't know u can write shit like this, props
 

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Re: Untitled, But What Can I Say...
« Reply #3 on: October 11, 2004, 05:25:14 PM »
afraid of grundy?


no on the real, that was actually quite dope, didn't know u can write shit like this, props


Yea, I write all sorts of shit...Most of the shit I drop on here is straight out keystyle on the spot...Straight off the dome shit...The dope shit I use for songs...Thanks though...PeACe
 

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Re: Untitled, But What Can I Say...
« Reply #4 on: October 11, 2004, 05:39:02 PM »
afraid of grundy?


no on the real, that was actually quite dope, didn't know u can write shit like this, props


Yea, I write all sorts of shit...Most of the shit I drop on here is straight out keystyle on the spot...Straight off the dome shit...The dope shit I use for songs...Thanks though...PeACe

so u got shit recorded? Since u make beats too, are u actually planning to work as an artist for real? Cause this is actually better (and especially mostly less formulatic) than what the great majority of people come up with when they wanna be 'deep' (how i hate that word) that's why i gotta give you props...ur battle shit is good too, but it's something more people are capable of comin up with
 

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Re: Untitled, But What Can I Say...
« Reply #5 on: October 11, 2004, 11:51:46 PM »
afraid of grundy?


no on the real, that was actually quite dope, didn't know u can write shit like this, props


Yea, I write all sorts of shit...Most of the shit I drop on here is straight out keystyle on the spot...Straight off the dome shit...The dope shit I use for songs...Thanks though...PeACe

so u got shit recorded? Since u make beats too, are u actually planning to work as an artist for real? Cause this is actually better (and especially mostly less formulatic) than what the great majority of people come up with when they wanna be 'deep' (how i hate that word) that's why i gotta give you props...ur battle shit is good too, but it's something more people are capable of comin up with


Well, I've been writing and recording for the last 5 years...My plan has always been to keep music in my future, whether it be rapping, producing, or whetever...I've written countless rhymes, all different kinds too...The battle shit I drop on here is just some bullshit I come up with when I get bored...I used to record tracks on my PC about 2 years ago (www.soundclick.com/sccitthashit), but I graduated to studio time with semi-famous peeps...None of my studio shit has been released yet, and I am still trying to get some stuff released on this site...Masters don't belong to me though...PeACe
 

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Re: Untitled, But What Can I Say...
« Reply #6 on: October 12, 2004, 08:44:59 AM »
Keep shit up NIK!
 

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Re: Untitled, But What Can I Say...
« Reply #7 on: October 14, 2004, 05:11:18 PM »
yeah that was good nik
don't quote mre boy I ain't said shit "yet"
 

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Re: Untitled, But What Can I Say...
« Reply #8 on: October 15, 2004, 02:16:11 PM »
Fuck THOUGH I KNeW that shit was garbage, take it back to the lab faggot..lol
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Re: Untitled, But What Can I Say...
« Reply #9 on: October 16, 2004, 06:07:26 AM »
Fuck THOUGH I KNeW that shit was garbage, take it back to the lab faggot..lol
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he's better than you actually....................................................IMO
 

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Re: Untitled, But What Can I Say...
« Reply #10 on: October 16, 2004, 05:16:59 PM »
Fuck THOUGH I KNeW that shit was garbage, take it back to the lab faggot..lol
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he's better than you actually....................................................IMO

I guess everybody has there own opinion..lol...it seems like you're kinda on his nuts though, let him handle his own shit for once...
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Re: Untitled, But What Can I Say...
« Reply #11 on: October 17, 2004, 05:38:05 AM »
^ yeah, i will, i'm not on his nuts, it's just my opinion
 

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Re: Untitled, But What Can I Say...
« Reply #12 on: December 01, 2004, 01:00:09 PM »
yeah you are on his nuts,your swinging on his nutzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
don't quote mre boy I ain't said shit "yet"
 

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Re: Untitled, But What Can I Say...
« Reply #13 on: December 02, 2004, 08:51:29 AM »
I feel pressure on my shoulder & tension in my muscles
A moor of thoughts, festooned with all my struggles
My troubles, a puddle of mud, life under rubble
Everything's extemporaneous, I lose my breath when I hustle
As tears drip, I’m fearless, appearance…
is the covering to my soul, I'd rather be jumping off a sheer cliff
Insufferable noise is the soundtrack to my existence
But I mask that with music, because the outside world's resistance
So imperceptible it's incredible, it pulls me back to reality
I'm not aware if it’s just me, inclination is abnormality
Bells ring loudly awaken my mental hell
I see devils with halos, hearing their gentle yells
Soul can't escape, even though it's suffering
But maybe I'm just a coward who needs some toughening

That was deep, nice rhyme, maybe what Saul Williams says is true, and you'll be able to alter your condition through the power of your own words.
Givin' respect to 2pac September 7th-13th The Day Hip-Hop Died

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Re: Untitled, But What Can I Say...
« Reply #14 on: October 27, 2005, 09:58:07 PM »
I feel pressure on my shoulder & tension in my muscles
A moor of thoughts, festooned with all my struggles
My troubles, a puddle of mud, life under rubble
Everything's extemporaneous, I lose my breath when I hustle
As tears drip, I’m fearless, appearance…
is the covering to my soul, I'd rather be jumping off a sheer cliff
Insufferable noise is the soundtrack to my existence
But I mask that with music, because the outside world's resistance
So imperceptible it's incredible, it pulls me back to reality
I'm not aware if it’s just me, inclination is abnormality
Bells ring loudly awaken my mental hell
I see devils with halos, hearing their gentle yells
Soul can't escape, even though it's suffering
But maybe I'm just a coward who needs some toughening

That was deep, nice rhyme, maybe what Saul Williams says is true, and you'll be able to alter your condition through the power of your own words.


Thanks again...