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Quote from: *Jamal* on October 21, 2004, 05:41:10 AMThanks Quote from: Now_I_Know on October 22, 2004, 02:40:03 PMJamal still reads this board, you know... $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$
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Man, props on that, it was written very nicely, i could picture everything but the guy hanging them twice, i didnt get how we would hang them twice, would he hang them, and say naw i wanna hang em somewhere else, lol why, no one would know that he hung em somewhere else firstand the one shot dude, you need to make it clear how he could kill people with one bullet, cuz once a bullet is in the human flesh i dont see how it would ricashade or somethin and hit someone else, so be more clear on that.and when that seamus guy asks samuel, "whats his past?" that doesnt sound very natural, i would go with somethin like, so whats the deal with him, or whats his story, you know.besides those, it was great, you exceeded my expectations specially at a western movie, which i think is hard to make interesting nowdays.
lol thought so.