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ainsy
Lil Geezy
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first freestyle ( on this site)
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December 22, 2004, 03:51:16 AM »
though still inexperienced, my lyrics are precise n ye know that ye feelin this/
sum faggot say am only here for the porn, wots the deal wit this, ya dead wrong/
son wot the fuck is you on, i aint here to talk that gangsta shit, that half of yall think you are/
rap is more than rims, women, cash, the requirements to be a modern day rap-star/
inteligence can go far, further than you think, further than the violence yall try 2 inflict/
i create rhymes lyrically defined, stay mentaly inclined, while yall physically decline/
better than me? ya must b out your mind, bout time, you find, ya spot in da line, ya position in life/
but yet i take off ma hat, to any1 out ther makin the cash, even if uz a fag, ur still doin wot haf of us cant/
avoid puttin the bias slant, on things, im ya worst nightmare, tha oppisite of that thing, by ya bed that catches ya dreams/
more intense than lazer light beams,contact me n prepare to lose bones n limbs n all things important/
it aint the sound of musik nymore, its the sound of u choking, heaftier coughs than marley wen smoking/
im dne wit this shit, tryn 2 differ the format that i rhyme-while, uz best b hopin ima differ my life-style/
let me kno wot u fink, jus a quik fing so dont b to judgemental, n i tried 2 use a diferent format, but i do usualy use the more normal format, il drop sum more regular verses l8r, peace
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ainsy
Lil Geezy
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Re: first freestyle ( on this site)
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December 23, 2004, 05:37:22 AM »
ano it aint my best piece eva, but uppin sum feed plz!!!
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::Mr. Hahn::
Muthafuckin' Don!
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Re: first freestyle ( on this site)
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January 13, 2005, 05:38:29 AM »
Not bad man.
"though still inexperienced, my lyrics are precise n ye know that ye feelin this/
sum faggot say am only here for the porn, wots the deal wit this, ya dead wrong/"
Nice line hehehe!~
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As I prepare to meet my moment of truth"
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