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BOUT TIME
« on: January 04, 2005, 03:18:06 AM »
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der u go yall dis one of my tracks i got the first and third verse and chorus the second verse goes to my homie goko aka infamous in fresno
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Re: BOUT TIME
« Reply #1 on: January 04, 2005, 05:39:40 AM »
I'm downloading it now...i'll let u know what i think...
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And you know they'll never stop the furious force of my rhymes
So like they say, every dog has it's day
And like they say, God works in a mysterious way
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Re: BOUT TIME
« Reply #2 on: January 04, 2005, 05:53:16 AM »
The.....beat isnt bad....props to the beatmaker...

But the whole "nanana" part is kinda i dunno..i dont like it.....the chorus if you had someone else singing it...might have been okay..."phlatline phlatline" sounds a bit too..clear? i woulda liked it distorted..

All and all....i cant do any better....so...not too bad man....4/10?

You dont sound original though....hoes...bitches..."Bullet holes in your car"...."My hoes suiting up".....

Why dont u rap about something thats relevant to you..?

Once again it comes down to material....over and over again hip hop is about gangsta shit...

Binary Star - Honest Expression

"Yo, I ain't hardcore, I don't pack a nine millimeter
Most a y'all gangsta rappers ain't hardcore neither
Whoever get mad, then I'm talkin' 'bout you
Claim you fear no man, but never walk wit' our crew
Where I'm from, your reputation don't mean jack
So what, you pack gats and you sell fiends crack
You ain't big time, my man
You ain't no different from the next cat in my neighborhood who
did time
Rhyme after rhymes it's the same topic
What make you think you hardcore 'cause you was raised in the
projects
Broke-ass finally got a hundred in your pocket
Now you on the mic, spittin' money's no object
What you say is bullcrap, if you wasn't wit' your crew
Or wasn't drunk off the brew, would you still pull gats?"

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Gang Starr


"But they can't take the respect, that I've earned in my lifetime
And you know they'll never stop the furious force of my rhymes
So like they say, every dog has it's day
And like they say, God works in a mysterious way
So I pray, remembering the days of my youth
As I prepare to meet my moment of truth"
 

Da WCC Hopar!

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Re: BOUT TIME
« Reply #3 on: January 04, 2005, 02:03:05 PM »
ya i feel wat u sayin but this is just a hobby and help me release anger and keeps me from breakin heads
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Re: BOUT TIME
« Reply #4 on: January 04, 2005, 03:08:29 PM »
For real, that's some good shit. I like, I like.
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Re: BOUT TIME
« Reply #5 on: January 05, 2005, 02:37:59 AM »
Quote from: D.P.G.D. on January 04, 2005, 02:03:05 PM
ya i feel wat u sayin but this is just a hobby and help me release anger and keeps me from breakin heads

Understandable man! Its a real decent effort, like i said, i cannot do any better, no where close!

Keep the work coming though!
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"But they can't take the respect, that I've earned in my lifetime
And you know they'll never stop the furious force of my rhymes
So like they say, every dog has it's day
And like they say, God works in a mysterious way
So I pray, remembering the days of my youth
As I prepare to meet my moment of truth"
 

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Re: BOUT TIME
« Reply #6 on: January 05, 2005, 04:45:30 AM »
its pretty decent lol. somehow i expected you to have mauzip-like skills. but you're pretty decent. props.
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Re: BOUT TIME
« Reply #7 on: January 05, 2005, 01:26:46 PM »
thanx yall but i wood like to hear more from the rest of yall
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