Are you just a Dream???FEEDBACK

[Dreamz]

Are you just thoughts place in my head//
Are you the reason all my feeling are not dead//
How come we're only together when my eye are shut//
How come when your mention i get a nervous gut//
Why is it we hardly ever talk, but i think bout you all the time//
Why is it I wish and pray everyday that you will be mine//
Is it just my emotions runnin wild, that basiclly what it seems//
Is it cause your real or are you just a dream?//

Asking myself these questoins, only to find a blank//
Your a perfect 10, but to you what do I rank//
Will I just be your friend or will there be more//
Your unknown to me and I just want to explore//
From head to toe, from your heart to your mind//
I want to be open but my emotions keep me confined//
They keep me in the darkness of the shadows//
But your the light which shynes from the meadows//
So here I told you the ways about you I feel//
So are you just a dream or are you something real?//
   








 

[thatboi]

It was ok but you definitly gotta add some more to that fo sho.

[bez]

Sweet and very short. 

[Dreamz]

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[boycriedwolf619]

nice man that was deep

[Dreamz]

yo thanks

[hope glimmers]

keep em comin dream, your posts are always good, dont give up.. good luck