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CITY_BOY

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NEW SONG!! LET THE HOOD KNOW!! YOUNG KHACI FEAT CITY BOY!!
« on: April 14, 2005, 07:16:46 PM »
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CITY_BOY

  • Lil Geezy
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Re: NEW SONG!! LET THE HOOD KNOW!! YOUNG KHACI FEAT CITY BOY!!
« Reply #1 on: April 15, 2005, 01:06:37 PM »
dont sleep!
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HK Mofo

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Re: NEW SONG!! LET THE HOOD KNOW!! YOUNG KHACI FEAT CITY BOY!!
« Reply #2 on: April 15, 2005, 08:42:01 PM »
Hey man, Ifeel u overall.  Did u spit or produce on this? 

Cornflakes is hard.  Married the block.  Man, some good lines in there throughout the track.. 

I have to say actually, both have damm good skills and depth to the lyrx.

Improvements?  I'm stretchin' here maybe.  The first rhyme you could drop one of the layers on the vocals, no need to hide behind the layers so much one with a feint second or maybe some add clips like was done l8r is good.  Let the vocals on the beginning stand more on their own.   The low voice back lay on the chorus is off key.  I don't know about crying tears in the chorus, my opinion drop it, but I like the rest of the chorus. 

Again, damm nice work from my ears.

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CITY_BOY

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Re: NEW SONG!! LET THE HOOD KNOW!! YOUNG KHACI FEAT CITY BOY!!
« Reply #3 on: April 16, 2005, 07:43:32 PM »
good lookin hommie!!!!  i appriciate the feed back and i will definatly work on those recording advise you gave a nigga! and im on the second verse!
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