"FEEDBACK" (Keystyle)

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[size=08pt]What do I need to do just to get some Feedback?
I'll drop 3 Raps a day & get reads, but nobody Reacts
it don't make Me Mad, but still, it Makes Me Think
I don't Fake w/ 'Pink minks' or 'bling', am I Wastin' Ink?
I May Need Shrinks, but I just replace them by Doin' This
under several Influences, therapy's what my Music Is
I Truly Spit what I feel & whatever else is On My Mind
I don't Prolong Each Line or pack every Song w/ Rhymes
about the same lame subjects, Repeatedly, I flow Eazily
any1 hearin' or feelin' me? Is this how it Needs To Be?
most MC's You See on t.v. are Portrayin' An Image
I stay myself day & night, while foo's be Playin' w/ Gimmicks
no complainin', but I'm aimin' to Stimulate Some Thought
would you rather read false bullshit or some Str8 Hip Hop?
delve into the plot more, check it, it Thickens as you Get In
-to the nitty gritty, I'm Kickin' facts, ignore it or Listen
my Mission's merely to make sure that Everything's Good
keepin' it hood, yet creative, to provoke some Input
all I'm askin' for's a Reply, from the West to East Side
leave a comment if you got the time, no need to Deny
it only takes a minute or 2, I've left criticism for Others
so return the favor, from the ghettos up to every Suburb
I put it down for L.A., Diego & The Bay, the Hardest
& Smartest, Regardless, 'guess I'm just another slept-on Artist*

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its all good... the best rappers are the ones nobody knows about... be proud that ur underrated... it makes it so much better wen u surprise ppl

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its all good... the best rappers are the ones nobody knows about... be proud that ur underrated... it makes it so much better wen u surprise ppl

[size=08pt]Point well taken Thanks for introducing that perspective to me, it just gets annoying/frustrating putting so much into it just to get ingored. I know you real MC's can relate to me/this - Uppin'*[/size]