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K0NfUzIoN

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modesty
« on: June 02, 2005, 09:56:37 PM »
Mainstream glorifies the lies of those who live to die
Here’s a memorable reply, like cement these words solidify
I want to spit tha prolific, gifted words of the truth
My subjects is shifted from what is often heard by the youth
Yet who am I, a netcee wit no thug in him
Its do or die, and I plan to spit lyrical venom
Send em reality, with certain accurate precision
Take aim at the propaganda, hit or miss wit this blurred vision
Decisions is made that alter life on a daily basis
Faces the choice that I make bout my daily cases
Placed on my heart and my soul the poetry bout life
Theres better in store, an I plan to release struggle and strife
Subtle device such as this technique and method
Designed to entice readers, I supply when requested
So I invite you inside my intellect and mind
Humility or arrogance, what do you expect to find



 

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Re: modesty
« Reply #1 on: June 03, 2005, 07:45:10 AM »
wow konfuzion...thats the sickest i've seen from u, really nice and it was real...much props
 

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modesty
« Reply #2 on: June 03, 2005, 08:32:25 AM »
Sick, just plain ill & real. I loved the multi's, all the rhymes were on point & the content was heartfelt, I thought. I got no complaints, personally. Keep up the great work, dawg. I was feelin' it! Stay up - Peace*
 

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Re: modesty
« Reply #3 on: June 03, 2005, 02:58:13 PM »
Thanks for noticin the progress, good lookin out