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Mani®

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this one of my battle flows
« on: August 20, 2005, 11:05:57 AM »
This was a so-called net beef some youngstaz was tryin me on XXL site. They got mad at me dissin 50 on a track called I'm Curtis Jackson. So ripped three of them new assholes with this.

Come to Nor C-A and leave to home with a Bid on ya Pension
Dislike my Shit? But I still got Yo Attention
God'll put a DOT on ya HEAD, BELIEVE ME like it's a Sign of ya NEW Religion
Haha! Told ya'll I was Jokin when ya'll saw 50 I was Dissin
Think ya Better? Ya Wishing.... SIT DOWN Pussies that's TOILET Humor From Ya'll PISSIN
Every Nigga on here talkin shit about G-Unit and Game but I don't them Spittin
What? To Afraid to Mention, Barz on a Cat known for Snitchin?
Claimin #1(ONE), I'll Over-Throne that Position, Ya'll Babies Lucky I really GoT WATER to Christ'n
BarzOfFiya got Lava to make Satan Start Hitchin
Proves It's HELL to Pay, and Don't Worry about the Bricks I'm Flippin
Get Ya Own. I'm Salary, Kids you just Allowance when Momz n Pops ain't Whippin
I MANAGE to Control Rappers Moves like Violator, Lantigua(xxl) and Henchmen
Author of more than 2 Cities, so I'm Pass Charles Dickins
Kiss My Ass with Ya Fiction, JOS compare Me to JA'S(look at the simular name dude)You Trippin!
Don't wanna See me on Mic's/Mike's, that's Why ya Court Reading what I type on my SideKickn,2 Ballin like a Jr. Pippen
Fuck a Coach Carter, Ya'll Bench I'm a Starter I stayed a Couple Years up In Richmond
Catch these Ballz Bitches, Tea Bag Dippin and I ain't speakin on Lipton
Ya Slobbin not Spittin, like ya Curtis Residue from Lisp'n
9 Shots Can help ya Be Clones, but Brains n Hearts I ain't Missin
Listin after the Up Liftin, tell them Legends on Earth they been Bittin
I Freeze ya Stuck on Mics, can't Hold to Heat Up even with Mittens
Ya Write? I Free-Style but it Does Look Written
Like Roles Acted by Porn Women and Men Stickin
My favorite Dead President is Bengamin, I Hate BUSH, tush Hides Secrets since Nixon
Don't get My Hands around Necks, these PIECES won't Get ya Glistened
But BLOOD will Stop, See the BLUE Face like ya Unworthy Piru Transformed to Crippin
Ya Beggin for this Flow, okay... Start Sippin
Guzzles too Much, it'll intoxicate yo Mental Condition
Like How I Shut Out the first Line of Three Fools in My Dissin to 50, Inning
Crack Grills like Fist to Glass Jaw, Pass All like this was Fast Ballz I'm Pitchin
Fuck Up Nerves, See Herb Constantly Twitchin
No Stoppin Me, Ya'll Full of Shit like Bags from Patients after Colostomies Shittin
And while you Reading to See How Mani Livin
I'm Givin a Hidden Black Entertainment, I know you use to MTV Cribb'n
But this is What I'm Adapted to in My Oakland Jurasdiction
Yeah Lots Of Heads Gone and Two Hand Fulls Inprisoned
But I'm these Messages I'm Submittin, Is For Those In the Ghetto's and Barrio's to Keep they Ambitions
While these Fakes remind Me of Sacario with and Jay-z Rendition
The One, Jos, and Water XXL? Only Here and recievin a Subscribtions
Stay Quiet Like the New Rapper Trend WHISPERIN
Ya Fuckin Up a Good Beat, No wonder why Textin to Hide ya Discribtion
Even through this Wireless, Ya Biasness already Show ya Bitchin
My Punches Only Infront of Ya'll Online, Stooges Why ya Flinchin
SMOKEY messin what My Emotions, this Big WORM by Friday will Have ya Computer Glitchin
AYOoo! Admins Mods! They wackness is Due For Suspension
These Kids I'm teachin them Hip Hop 101, But they Beggin After Schoolin for Detention
Players I Son in My Game like the Sr. Cal Ripken
FUCKin these Pussies Up, like Force Full Sex, Call ME A DICK?....Well it is evidence after Rippin
I'm Recommendin, NET quittin to ya'll is the Best Decision
Ya Test is Forbibbin, BarzOfFiya leaves More than a Scorchin Endin.....Hahahaha!

"Just A Lil BIT" I had in thought at the moment to pay back some attention to you bitches.  Go Humm on 50's Nuts! I do got personals on 50 if I actually wanted to expose him. More than just media doggs. But don't you ever compare me to now Ja.... I wouldn't never let 50 change my shit up and disappear and then be a son of my style. He said God Gave Him Style? What he believe in jah? Hahahaha!

Mani aka BarzOfFiya 510 Oakland, C-A!


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Mo Z. Dizzle

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Re: this one of my battle flows
« Reply #1 on: August 24, 2005, 08:19:55 PM »
thas friggin sick, same rhyming style for all linez; id never be able to do dat

on a sidenote, check out my write-up and gimme an opinion lol.

but yea, that is sum kickass dissin, good job  8)
      
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Mani®

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Re: this one of my battle flows
« Reply #2 on: August 25, 2005, 04:31:26 AM »
Thanks dogg we all have our days that we got it pretty iller than our others. This was one of my favorite ones. I don't like dissin actually unless it's a need. But it was fun makin it and I'm sure you can do some shit that's fiya just work hard. I'll be sure to check the write up too is that what it's called? Anyway thanks for the feedback I appreciate ya'll just peepin it.

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Re: this one of my battle flows
« Reply #3 on: August 25, 2005, 06:24:14 AM »
Dope as fuck verse!
 

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Re: this one of my battle flows
« Reply #4 on: August 25, 2005, 11:37:34 AM »
It´s not bad...dope thing is how you ended every line on the same rhyme even though it´s of course not an immaculate rhyme structure...you´re coming kinda hard, you could elaborate on the punches and wordplay.

Nice to see some talent on my old board though 8)

(but damn, the battle section is nothing no more)